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Greeneyes
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0 posted 01-14-2001 09:42 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Greeneyes

I close my eyes sometimes
and remember our relationship,
peaceful, calming

We, like butterflies,
danced around the common pollen
gliding sometimes on
different air waves,
yet always sharing
the same sun,
making our gentle
landing on the same petal

I have my memories of living
in a cocoon as one with you,
molding and shaping
together a beautiful
flight of life,
beautiful wing colors
fluttering gracefully
through bluer skies

I spread my wings to fly,
some days only to get
caught in your
net memory again

We were monarch
warriors of this flight,

As I fly alone with
you in my mind, I
see our bluer skies
in the green meadows
of my memory where

Still we dance

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 01-14-2001).]
© Copyright 2001 Lauren~ - All Rights Reserved
Mark Bohannan
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1 posted 01-14-2001 09:44 PM       View Profile for Mark Bohannan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mark Bohannan

There are some memories that we just don't want to ever let go of and that is the beauty of those special times that can always be reflected upon to bring the smile and reassurance that we have truely tasted the best in life.  Lovely write from you but of course we have come to expect that of you.
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2 posted 01-14-2001 09:51 PM       View Profile for Victoria   Email Victoria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Victoria

Enjoyed your words lauren..a sad one..memories can be very painful..
like a butterfly caught within
the pages of our minds..
          
                ~V~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


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3 posted 01-14-2001 10:02 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

GreenEyes~
This is as lovely a poem as I've seen this day.
Sheer beauty in the metaphor~
Very tenderly phrased.
I want you to know just how much I enjoyed your thoughts.
~*Marge*~


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4 posted 01-15-2001 07:29 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

Mark~
Thank you for such kind words....I am so glad I have found this poet's sight to share and read and just be myself and get lost in the many beautiful poems here...    

Greeneyes~




***


"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
-Unknown




[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 01-15-2001).]
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5 posted 01-15-2001 07:33 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

this is beautiful. . .

full of memory and longing. . . wonderfully done Greeneyes. . .

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6 posted 01-15-2001 08:02 PM       View Profile for snowpants   Email snowpants   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit snowpants's Home Page   View IP for snowpants

'I spread my wings to fly,
some days only to get
caught in your
net memory again'

Beautiful write, greeneyes.  So full of great images!

sp  


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7 posted 01-16-2001 12:30 AM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

~V~ Indeed they can be, thank you for your reply, as it always means so much...

Greeneyes~



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"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
-Unknown


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8 posted 01-16-2001 12:32 AM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Beautiful imagery, greeneyes and by the way, you're very pretty!

Nathan
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9 posted 01-16-2001 12:33 AM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

Marge~ You are a real blessing to these pages, in your poems and replies...I thank you with a heartfelt tip pen.....




Greeneyes~




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10 posted 01-16-2001 12:35 AM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

Sven~ I always have a smile knowing you have stopped by to read....    Thank you kindly my friend.....




Greeneyes~




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11 posted 01-16-2001 12:39 AM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

Snowpants~ Greetings to you my friend, and thank you for the sweet reply and smile..... Hugs to you....




Greeneyes~




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-Unknown


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12 posted 01-16-2001 12:44 AM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

Nate Dogg~ Thank you for stopping in to read my words, as I appreciate that much....and for the compliment, well...you made me blush...




Greeneyes~




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"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
-Unknown


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