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Mike
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0 posted 2001-01-14 12:54 PM


Have you ever wondered,
...what's beyond the sky,
Beyond the edge of ever,
...where only dreams can fly?
Orion's sapphires left behind,
...Hesperus unknown,
Beyond the well of emptiness,
...where stars have never shone.

Before life was reality,
...upon this orb, our earth,
Amid the splendors, yet unfathomed,
...man gazed upon his birth.
Beyond the rim of nothingness,
...in chambers of the soul,
Immortal absolution,
...upon the heart inscroll.

Have you ever wondered,
...what's beyond the sky,
Beyond the edge of ever,
...where only angels fly?




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Elizabeth Santos
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1 posted 2001-01-14 01:37 PM


Yes, I have pondered this question,
But never so eloquenty
This is stunning
LIz

Lady Lightning
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2 posted 2001-01-14 01:52 PM


Mike...
I think we all surely must have wondered just this..
This is truly a wonderful poem ..
Thanks for a smile and a "wonder"..  
~LL~


The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2001-01-14 02:01 PM


Mike~

'Have you ever wondered,
...what's beyond the sky,
Beyond the edge of ever,
...where only angels fly?'


Too many times to count.
What a wonderful Saturday night you had.
Thank you for sharing this little ponder -
and I shall do just that - again !
*smiling*
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Mike
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4 posted 2001-01-14 04:58 PM


Elizabeth, I thank you for taking the time to read and comment.  Your reply is very gracious and is appreciated.
Lady... thanks muchly for reading and for the wonderful reply.
Marge...you do have a lovely smile, poetic ponderer...  that is me, just a little ponderer... er... well... maybe a not so little ponderer.. hehe  take care and thanks for replying.

Sunshine
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5 posted 2001-01-14 05:05 PM


This is not only stunning, but awesome...and it likes me a lot...

tucking it into my library...thanks for sharing, Mike!

Denise
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6 posted 2001-01-14 08:00 PM


Very beautifully done, Mike! I just love your ponderings!

Denise

Martie
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7 posted 2001-01-14 08:04 PM


Mike--you are the greatest ponderer I know...and I know quite a few.
Mike
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8 posted 2001-01-14 09:46 PM


Sunshine...why do I feel like I am being tucked in...*smile*  thanks for the awesome...  take care Kansas neighbor...
Denise...and thanks to my favorite legal type person. Hope you are keeping that boss in line.  Thanks again.
Martie...hope you made it through the big storm I read about.  Appreciate the gracious response, kind and gentle flower poetess.

catalinamoon
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9 posted 2001-01-14 09:51 PM


Such eloquent musings, flowing like liquid starlight..
Sandra

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10 posted 2001-01-14 11:14 PM


Mike,
   A magical journey.  Beautiful...
            Elise

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