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Sunnyone
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0 posted 2001-01-14 12:40 PM




I’m out of control, and can’t hold back,
the beating of this heart…
The trembling when you kiss these lips,
could tear my world apart…
The sparks that fly, when eye meets eye,
could start a raging fire…
But nothing can compare to mounting waves
of sweet desire…

Your fingers touch my skin, and leave
electric trails behind…
You look into my eyes and I’m
afraid of what you’ll find…
You’ll see the need that’s waiting there,
for you inside my heart…
I’m ready for your taking…
Please don’t break my world apart…

But hold me ‘til the beating of my heart
has found a pace…
And kiss me ‘til my trembling lips are
steady on my face…
And keep me safe upon the waves
of love’s desiring sea…
I’ve given you my self-control…
You’ve set my spirit free…




Write on!
-<--<--{(@



© Copyright 2001 Sunnyone - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-01-14 12:45 PM


Sunny1~
This is just lovely, lovely, lovely !
What a pleasure to read this beauty.
~*Marge*~


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jwesley
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2 posted 2001-01-14 01:07 PM


As Marge said, just lovely, my friend.

jwesley

Sunnyone
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3 posted 2001-01-14 01:12 PM


~~~ Marge ~~~
Ah.....so glad that you dropped by and enjoyed my love poem on this Sunday!!  

~~~ jwesley ~~~
If I could put a smile on your face, then I feel happy, my friend!!  


Write on!
-<--<--{(@



Lady Lightning
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4 posted 2001-01-14 01:28 PM


Sunny1...
This is simply wonderful..
I loved reading this and feeling all the emotions..Made me smile on a cold Sunday afternoon...Thanks for the lovely read...
  ~LL~


The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

bbent
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5 posted 2001-01-14 11:04 PM


Hi Sunny
  Absolutely real........................
Anybody who's ever known love should be moved.Sure worked for me.
                   Soar on forever.
                    
                            bbent


~ live and let live ~

Sunnyone
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6 posted 2001-01-15 01:13 AM


~~~ LL ~~~
I am so glad that my words can warm up a chilly winter afternoon, and put a smile on your face!! Thank you!!  

~~~ bbent ~~~
Thank you, and may we all soar on forever!! Sometimes it's ok to be out of control!!  


Write on!
-<--<--{(@



Irie
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7 posted 2001-01-15 01:14 AM


Sunny,
How AWESOME to have these feelings.......
And you've expressed them quite well.
Truly a lovely piece to read


~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"



Poeminister
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8 posted 2001-01-15 01:18 AM


Sunny1--Lovely and passionate.  Beautiful write...

Poeminister

"It is our business to go as we are impelled."
~ D.H. Lawrence


Sunnyone
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9 posted 2001-01-15 05:33 AM


~~~ Irie ~~~
Oh, thank you, my friend....
It's easy to express such feelings when you have them in your heart!!  

~~~ Poeminister ~~~
Thank you so much, and I'm glad that you enjoyed your read of this work!!  


Write on!
-<--<--{(@



Kit McCallum
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10 posted 2001-01-15 07:11 AM


Sunny, this is truly wonderful! What a magnificent flow, and such beautiful sentiments ... an inspiring and enchanting read to start my day, thank you!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Kethry
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11 posted 2001-01-15 08:15 AM


Sunny,
absolutely fabulous!
write on
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



Mark Bohannan
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12 posted 2001-01-15 08:59 AM


Fly high my sister of the blue pages.......this was a lovely write and a beautiful way of expressing what is in your heart.
maxtec1
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13 posted 2001-01-15 09:11 AM


Gee lady i loved this poem. I love the feelings of passion. I became lost in your words. Wondeful writing.
Love and light,
Richard

Sunnyone
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14 posted 2001-01-15 12:48 PM


~~~ Kit ~~~
Good morning.....and may you have a day full of love and passion!! Thank you!!  

~~~ Kethry ~~~
and you write on, always!! Thank you!!  

~~~ Mark ~~~
Glad you enjoyed, my brother of the not-so-blue pages!!  

~~~ Richard ~~~
Oh....if a poem can cause a reader to become engrossed in it's touch, then it is worth it to the writer!! Thank you!!  


Write on!
-<--<--{(@



Victoria
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15 posted 2001-01-15 01:30 PM


Wonderful feelings within your words hon..enjoyed reading very much HUGS

                        ~V~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



Robert Joseph
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16 posted 2001-01-15 01:37 PM



Sunny, your words are rocketing with passion...so much of what you share, delivers precious thoughts of my own love.

Robert Joseph

catalinamoon
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17 posted 2001-01-15 02:17 PM


Oh Sunny, this is perfect. Funny I just wrote a similar themed poem, but in free verse. Course I like yours better! We are thinking alike again..
S

Sunnyone
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18 posted 2001-01-16 03:38 PM


~~~ V ~~~
Thank you for stopping by and reading, my friend....always nice to visit with you!!  

~~~ R.J. ~~~
If you can take these feelings of love into your own life experience, than I feel my words had great meaning, and I thank you!!  


:)>>Smiles from Sunny<<:)




Sunnyone
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19 posted 2001-01-16 03:40 PM


~~~ Sandra ~~~
Yes.....we are twins in thought, a good percentage of the time.....that's why you are such a wonderful friend!!  


:)>>Smiles from Sunny<<:)




Corinne
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20 posted 2001-01-16 04:00 PM


A lovely poem full of joy!  Thanks for sharing!

Corinne

Paula Finn
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21 posted 2001-01-16 04:14 PM


Beautiful
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