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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2001-01-14 09:17 AM


Our Domain

Each infinite rounds a point
Blessing us a sound of chime
Rings endeavor in anoint
Circles forever in time.

And we in travel convey
Our searching journeys domain
In a firefly of stay
An infinity of reign.

In essence we are a cache
Apex probing through a core
Searching for a single match
To complete our evermore.

Each infinite rounds a point
Blessing us a sound of chime
Rings endeavor in anoint
Circles forever in time.

And each of us a sacred goal
To reach and join another soul.


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Sunnyone
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1 posted 2001-01-14 09:45 AM


With this wonderful write, you have captured the goal of the human heart.......


Write on!
-<--<--{(@



Janet Marie
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2 posted 2001-01-14 11:04 AM


In essence we are a cache
Apex probing through a core
Searching for a single match
To complete our evermore.

Each infinite rounds a point
Blessing us a sound of chime
Rings endeavor in anoint
Circles forever in time.

And each of us a sacred goal
To reach and join another soul.
======================

so very true Sy ...
you poetically define our hearts goal...
to find our true soul-mate...
and as always you do it in your style of Cool
love the vocab choices in this gem of wise  
very cool write me Stinky Winkie
later-infinate cool-gator
*   *
me

baby can I hold you tonite ...
maybe if I said the right words, at the right time ...
you'd be mine.
baby can I hold you tonite.
~tracy chapman~

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2001-01-14 11:55 AM


(sigh) oh yes, this is so very sincere and beautiful! Yes, we all live to love another, and to share this magic with the world. Love is the most beautiful thing in all the world, it's the complete essence of the soul. May we all find this love and nurture it forever! Thank you for sharing, my friend!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2001-01-14 12:12 PM


Seymour~
What a comforting write is this -

'And each of us a sacred goal
To reach and join another soul.'


Yes ...
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


Elizabeth Santos
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5 posted 2001-01-14 12:17 PM


Beautiful writing and beautiful thoughts
So well defined
Liz

Poeminister
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6 posted 2001-01-14 02:08 PM


Sy,
I enjoyed this muchly, and you knew I would...wonderful writing.

Poeminister

Mike
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7 posted 2001-01-14 02:11 PM


Well done. Enjoyed muchly.
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
8 posted 2001-01-14 03:30 PM


And you do this so well, again, and again, and again....
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
9 posted 2001-01-14 09:04 PM


Sunny1,
Thank you so much.

JM,
Thank you WW S.

Mistletoe,
You welcome and thank you.

Marge,
Thank you dear.

Elizabeth,
Thank you love Sy

Ooeninister,
Thanks for the wonderful.

Mike,
Thanks for the well done.

Karilea,
Thank you and *L*

Beckalini
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Yorkshire, England
10 posted 2001-01-14 09:11 PM


M'sieur Tabin, wonderful desrciption of the ultimate goal for the heart. Capitally done sir! I enjoyed it immensely  
~Becky~

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
11 posted 2001-01-14 11:41 PM


Bechalini,
I thank you for this wonderful comment.

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