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Innately Internal
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Innately Internal let me in, let me out I have me now some patience, bought and paid for inherently as central most normal is what I came for instinct fails me fail me not! for what I need is touch internally I look within for there I need it much born was I of commonness and find that less is more privately I seek inside what I've been looking for and if I have that sense in … … here … then why can't I find it there…out there… accustomed is my interior and inborn is my central control but I have yet to accustom me to that beyond my whole so am I the failure that cannot be the soul of my own mate? am I so fundamentally wrong in this, my own mistake? instinct prevails then comes common sense and then comes sense of no regard and while I dream of high on high I sit thoughtfully gathering up my own shards and private, private I keep my thoughts inherent in my dreams for this 'tis immanent that I find internal seams to question my normality and quell my internal bleed for what I think is natural could be called crucial need instinctively I reach for touch is that then asking for too much? Perhaps not when I all knowingly reach externally and find myself within the you of me… 01.13.01 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, this is incredible it really and truly is. Oh my love, take my hand, and I'll be there (I promise) This is truly wonderful piece love absolutely excellant. And it brought tears to my eyes. Take care love and hold tight, it looks like it's going to be a bumpy ride. Love Majestic marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(tears come down my cheeks) Oh Sunshine, I could feel such pain in here, this was so very sad! Oh, it must be so hard having to face this lovelorning hope! But don't give up, sweet one, may your sunshine perforate all sorrows, for sweetness follows, as Mike of R.E.M says! Than you for sharing, my friend! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oops..Noah, Marsha, I should have put a disclaimer... Watched Anthony Hopkins in "Instinct" last night...I won't give away the plot unless you've seen it, and after you have watched it then come back to read this...you will understand... this was not entirely personal...but then, I don't think we write that a little bit of reality doesn't seep through now and then... thank you both so much for reading, and even more, for feeling! |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely written... enjoyed your poem. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
it's always what's inside. . . always. . . wonderful my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
...find myself within the you of me.... now THERE is a phrase worthy of it's weight in patience!! Love it!  |
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Sunshine
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Mike, thank you... Sven...always... 'Deer...love it when a particular phrase hits a fancy...thanks! |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
quote: well, there's the one that hit MY fancy... i ask myself daily lately what's wrong with me.... thanks for the read |
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Sunshine
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Doreen...thanks for reading...[some questions can really bite, y'know?]...LOL... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
awesome... fabulous penned. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Sunshine
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Charisma, thank you for the fabulous... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Hey, enjoyed this Sunshine. I write most of my stuff from outside influences also. But I agree, we have to harbor a certain amount of feeling inside ourselves if we're to put that in the work. I'm not a sad person, but can put myself in that frame of mind if I want to write sad...as you obviously can also. Neat. jwesley |
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Sunshine
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James, a most insightful reply....thank you for reading between the lines... |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I wish my instincts would fail me....I could miss out on a lot of lousy stuff that way...the kind of stuff that leaves a guy roaming in the archives. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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