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Paula Finn
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0 posted 2001-01-14 03:41 AM


Until I found you
I never knew what love was
You define the word

© Copyright 2001 Paula Finn - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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1 posted 2001-01-14 04:29 AM


Wow happy poems!
write on
Kethry


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JamesMichael
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2 posted 2001-01-14 04:36 AM


Paula I am loving this...its still touching me...James
Paula Finn
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3 posted 2001-01-14 11:39 AM


LOL Keth its easy to be happy when someone loves you

James...I think my friend I finally found what I have been looking for...only time will tell

Marsha
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4 posted 2001-01-14 12:09 PM


Paula love, this is utterly delightful and yes I love it as always. What did I say love, I knew those aerial loops would do you the world of good.
Fabulous poem from you sweetie
Take care love
                 Mushy
                    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2001-01-14 12:26 PM


Paula~
Such a tiny definition
for such a GREAT BIG feeling !

I love it !
~*Marge*~


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Poeminister
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6 posted 2001-01-14 01:18 PM


hmm.. would you be able to say it this way too..

Until I found you
I never knew what love was
We define the word

Either way I love it!  Nicely done.

"...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls-
O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
-Poe


tracie66
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7 posted 2001-01-15 03:20 AM


WOW!!!
Paula this may be little but it sure says alot  
~HUG~
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Paula Finn
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missouri
8 posted 2001-01-17 01:29 AM


Marsha...musta been the roller coaster huh? Thanks sweetie

Marge...sometimes its not how big something is that counts...thanks

Poeminister...sure you could say it that way as well...wouldnt mean quite the same but its nice too thanks

Tracie...thank you Im glad you like it

CocoBaci
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9 posted 2001-01-17 01:32 AM



Oh Paula, such sweet verse you write...
Ya know I'm smiling sweetie when I read these poems you write...
*~coco~*


[This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 01-17-2001).]

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