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Valentine.....
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Valentine..... |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Valentine will thou be mine Mine until the end of time Time standing still in thine embrace Embrace of love abiding of faith Faith of two undivided and true True souls harmonious a song of pure Pure as this vow I now decree Decree unto parchment my heart for thee... *~coco~*  [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 01-14-2001).] |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Coco--I love it! Beautifully penned... Poeminister |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This is picture perfect |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Coco, What a lovely write with picture to match. write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Thank you Poe, Paula and Kethry... I'm happy you liked the poem... And now I am off 2dreamland... SweetDreamsU3 *~coco~* [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 01-14-2001).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Lovely Write... |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
What a lovely picture to go with the very lovely words!! I do so enjoy your writes!!  Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Enjoyed Coco..and a lovely visual painting too...HUGS ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Here is to hoping that your Valentine responds with a resounding "YES"!!!! I am sure he could not say no at all after reading this lovely treasure. Just beautiful my friend. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
very well done Coco...its not easy to write using this style of vocabulary and make it sound right and flow... you made it look very easy... very cool write....lovely and romantic jm baby can I hold you tonite ... maybe if I said the right words, at the right time ... you'd be mine. baby can I hold you tonite. ~tracy chapman~ |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
I loved the poemand the pic. nThey fit so well together and the time of year. I enjoyed the read, Love and light, Richard |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Yes I will, dear CoCo! You've penned a true and beautiful gem here. Plumb proud of you I am. jwesley |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
What a sweet surprise at start of day to discover your wonderful replies... Thank you so much PoetFriends SUNSHINE, SUNNY1, VICTORIA, MARK, JM, MAX and JAMES... Hugs2u *~coco~* |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Very pretty, Coco.. Lovely and so romantic.. I liked it much... ~LL~ The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dani~ I love the valentine of you Written from a heart so true Captured in romantic rhyme I'll be yours - if you'll be mine ! Well ... you just made it happen ! Lovely, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Very enjoyable. Thanks for the words and the picture goes well with them. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
*sigh* ok Coco. . . that's two *sighs* I've given out today. . . but, this is just so wonderful. . . I had to. . . simply beautiful my friend. . . thank you for sharing. . .  -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
LL->Thank you for your kind reply and coming by to read this short lil rhyme MARGE->A sweet treat you are to my day today and I trust you know that I'm smiling bright from the words of rhyme in your precious reply PROM->I am glad you enjoyed and appreciated the art image and I thank you for stopping by SVEN->To obtain a sigh from you is a distinguished compliment my friend, and I thank you from my heart for telling me this Hugs2u4 *~coco~* |
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