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encre du coeur
Junior Member

since 2000-12-24

Posts 15
Florida

0 posted 2001-01-14 02:08 AM

you don’t need to show me
how much you love me dear
your words say all I want
and all I need to hear
no fancy gifts or flowers
are needed for my love’s delight
just listen to the things I say
in the words I pen tonight
I know all about you
and will shout it from on high
the secret will be told soon
will be plastered in the sky
this love cannot be silent
the world must know of you
and I’m the one to reveal
the things your love can do

I write with the ink of my heart.

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

1 posted 2001-01-14 02:10 AM

encre du coeur--Lovely sentiments...beautiful write.

Poeminister

"...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls-
O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
-Poe

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

2 posted 2001-01-14 02:26 AM

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*sigh* god... i identify with this one way way way much....... *sigh*

you read mine? i'll read yours, k? hehe... sounds sorta childishly seductive?? LOL...

anyway... truly enjoyed yours and dont take that wrong because we dont even know each ohter...///// yet... hehe (wait!!! who ARE you??? LOL)

well whatever, at least i know what MY poem means... *whew*

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2001-01-14 04:39 AM

Yes this is very good...James

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

4 posted 2001-01-14 04:59 AM

encre du coeur,
beautiful write, just beautiful!
Write on
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2001-01-14 07:27 AM

I do believe I am going to have to add yet another wing to my personal library if you are going to write fine pieces like this! Welcome again to Passions...I hope you have found a new home in which to gift your talents...

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

6 posted 2001-01-15 09:56 PM

I like this. It gives the wonderful scent of anticipation.

Can I be your willful breeze,
Come to touch,
Your heart to ease?

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

7 posted 2001-01-15 11:09 PM

Beautiful write! Great expression of the one you love!

sp

I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me...

Lady Lightning
Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 422
Kentucky

8 posted 2001-01-16 02:30 AM

This is just simply wonderful...
I liked this alot!! ~LL~

The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

David2
Member

since 2000-03-22

Posts 407

9 posted 2001-01-21 09:11 PM

This was sincere...sweet...touching. I enjoyed it very much.

David2

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

10 posted 2001-01-22 07:16 PM

just wonderful. . .

wonderful. . .

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