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Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03
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0 posted 2001-01-14 01:54 AM


You have blue lilacs!

Pretentious,

My lost desire bloomed in
your lovely eyes.


/:^)==
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Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
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Staffordshire, England
1 posted 2001-01-14 02:57 AM


This is wonderful!  How I love those blue lilacs, and this poem........


Write on!
-<--<--{(@


Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
2 posted 2001-01-14 03:09 AM


Krawdad,
interesting style,not pretentious at all
write on
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



VAS
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since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
3 posted 2001-01-14 09:52 PM


Finally I found another of yours.  Hadn't seen anything since your "Yellow Moon."  This place is so busy I had to search clear to page 4 before I found this.  So here it is, back on 1 for a couple minutes, anyway. ;o}
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

4 posted 2001-01-14 10:19 PM


okay...the rule is? any poem about blue eyes is written for me or Christopher...now who's it gonna be?  LOL...and a very nice bit of poetry here, my mystery bug...
athena4
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since 2000-12-10
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5 posted 2001-01-14 10:36 PM


Krawdad,
    A very lovely read.  Write on...
          Elise

Krawdad
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6 posted 2001-01-15 01:15 AM


Sunny1 - too bad we can't share that lilac aroma about now . . .

Kethry - serendipitous actually, but to act on that seemed pretentious to me.

VAS - well, I'm not exactly prolific, at least by comparison to others around here, so there isn't a lot to look for.  Not even two handsful yet, scattered around.  But thanks for looking, there will be more.

serenity - blue eyes?  No, blue lilacs, "lovely" eyes.  And I'm sure yours are that too, but now you have some more competition.   "Bug", eh?  As in bed bug?
Say, are you skipping class?  Where is your acrostic?  Out with it!

athena4 - thanks, I'm scribblin' as fast as I can.  

/:^)==
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Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15
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Georgia, Fulton
7 posted 2001-01-16 12:07 PM


Beautiful write!

Nathan

Pixydust
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since 2001-01-14
Posts 36

8 posted 2001-01-16 12:14 PM


Oh...what an awesome description of the baby blue's.
"The lost desire bloomed in your lovely eyes"

ok...i'm hooked. good one krawdad! thanks for sharing.

Pixydust

Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada
9 posted 2001-01-16 12:16 PM


Good day,
I like this. I'm a minimulist myself most of the time, in writing,...I also took a look at your acrostics...very nicely done.  

Poeminister



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Alwye
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In the space between moments
10 posted 2001-01-16 10:49 AM


Short yes, but very sweet and beautiful.  Sometimes the less you say, the more you say. Exellent work!  

*Krista Knutson*

I'm a slow dying flower
In a frost-killing hour
The sweet turning sour and untouchable...
-Natalie Merchant

insect
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since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014

11 posted 2001-01-16 11:37 AM


Beautiful words you have here! Nicely said for blue eyes

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