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KokoStewartKoomoa
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0 posted 2001-01-13 10:40 PM



shimmering ideas
etching a lyrical spell
deep inside my soul
poetry that burns within
begging for release



Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



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Poeminister
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1 posted 2001-01-13 10:45 PM


I like!  Nicely done.

Poeminister

SEA
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2 posted 2001-01-13 10:49 PM


oh yes, me too!   I like this a lot!   -SEA
KokoStewartKoomoa
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3 posted 2001-01-13 10:54 PM


Thank you It fits all poets so very well... ever tried not to write? LOL can go bonkers trying that....

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



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4 posted 2001-01-14 05:15 AM


oh my......this fits all of us, wonderful expressed in this fabulous tanka.

love it

((Hugs))
Charisma

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5 posted 2001-01-14 11:19 AM


You expressed this well. Nice read  )

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You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat you better
You're gonna find, yes you will
That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King



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6 posted 2001-01-14 11:58 AM


Yes, Koko.....you've captured the poetic fire that burns within us all........
(P.S.  your flames are now a part of my hard drive!!!) Thank you!!  


Write on!
-<--<--{(@



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7 posted 2001-01-14 11:59 AM


BRAVO!!! YES! There is a flame that burns deep within each of our souls that if tendered will change the world and restore true love to the world one step at a time! Thank you for sharing, my friend!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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8 posted 2001-01-15 01:48 AM


koko,
indeed. true words spoken that we all can identify with

Honeybee
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9 posted 2001-01-15 10:16 AM




Yes, indeed!  I do relate!  Very well expressed, I love the last two lines  

Take care,
Melissa


The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams



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10 posted 2001-01-26 12:02 PM


I have been under that same spell...
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11 posted 2001-01-27 03:31 PM


I relate so vividly to this it's unreal, it's so true, it's under our skin, like a boiling, seething caldron!!!!

Kathleen



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12 posted 2001-01-27 03:46 PM


'Nuff said!

"Hearts will become practical when they make them unbreakable"
~The Wizard of Oz
Much love all,
Krissie


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