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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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"I'm lonely" she said and in that one, brief moment I longed to hold her ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
My heart gave a tug with the emotion you brought out through so few words in this perfect Senryu Sven, amazing!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
....in one brief moment.... you captured our hearts!....  Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
if only there were more like you............. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I am seconding that last reply.. Very touching. Hope all is well with you. Sandra |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Excellent...I love it - it struck a chord for some reason. great little write Sven K |
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Beckalini Member
since 2001-01-02
Posts 151Yorkshire, England |
Wow, this really caught me off guard, and now I find myself struggling to swallow a mountain-sized lump in my throat. Great write Sven....truly excellent. *hugs* ~Becky~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Brevity suits you too...well done! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
"I'm lonely" she said and in that one, brief moment I longed to hold her This my friend is the most beautiful and tender piece...thanks for sharing ~HUGS~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Nicely expressed PoetFriend... I enjoyed the read... Thank you *~coco~* |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
gee, sven, they don't even have to say they're lonely and I long to hold them! (hee hee) So lovely for so short a piece. All encompassing in it's brevity. jwesley |
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encre du coeur Junior Member
since 2000-12-24
Posts 15Florida |
short and sweet..all she needs I guess. I write with the ink of my heart. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sven, when you are good you are very, very good. write on Kethry. Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sven love, this is beautiful, grabbed me by the heart love, really really excellant. As always your style is sooooooooo good, do I love this, mmmmmmmm what do you think love?? Oh in that case Yes dear heart I do! Take care love Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Enjoy the read |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sven, So many of us hold you in our hearts... A beautiful read. Love, Elise |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Kit, thank you my friend. . . there are a lot of emotions here. . . Sunny, sometimes, I wish that the moment was just a little longer. . . thank you. . . passing shadows, there are more like me. . . some of them are here. . . the others? Well, you'll find them. . . thank you so much. . . Sandra, all is indeed well with me. . . and thank you. . . K, isn't it amazing how something can just reach out to you when you least expect it?? Thank you. . . Becky. . . thank you. . . please be ok. . . I don't want anyone to cry. . . Sunshine, sometimes, fewer words are better. . . thank you my friend. . . tracie my friend, you are most welcome. . . and thank you for reading. . . PoetFriend Coco, I am glad that you enjoyed my friend. . . James, lol my friend. . . I know how that is. . . and thank you. . .encre du coeur, I would hope so. . . thank you and welcome to Passions. . . Kethry, thank you. . . but now, I'm worried. . . what am I when I'm bad?? Marsha, I'm confused love. . . I really can't tell if you liked this one or not. . . lol of course I know you liked it. . .thank you so much love. . .vandana, glad that you enjoyed my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
A beautiful thought.. And some beautiful thoughts mean more when so simply stated. Can I be your willful breeze, Come to touch, Your heart to ease? |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
A beautiful thought.. And some beautiful thoughts mean more when so simply stated. Can I be your willful breeze, Come to touch, Your heart to ease? |
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