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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-01-13 04:21 PM


Words that go together well

Michelle will you write
a poem for me
written only for
mine eyes to see?

Will you tell me
how much you care
and all the love
you have to share?

Will you tell me
your kiss is fine
and one day soon
you will be mine?

Will you tell me
I am your man?
Write a poem for me Michelle
and please say that I am.

Jameslee@January12,2001
forYu


© Copyright 2001 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-01-13 05:07 PM


James, this likes me!...
Parker
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2 posted 2001-01-13 06:22 PM


James, very nice write.... so were hoping to see her write one and display it here, of course knowone will look, just you.  

Parker

Kit McCallum
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3 posted 2001-01-13 09:47 PM


Oh I hope she does James ... how could she resist these sweet words, nicely penned!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

KokoStewartKoomoa
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4 posted 2001-01-13 09:54 PM


ohhh me too! I hope she does too! i won't look....NOT! LOL  I'll just go lurk in the shadows now..... hehehehe

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



JamesMichael
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5 posted 2001-01-15 03:19 PM


Sincere thanks Sunshine, Parker, Kit and Koko...I gave her these poems on Sunday because we have been spending Sundays together...she said she will respond with a poem...she is a writer but not sure if she knows how to write poetry...I will find out..she has a soft heart...she is different from most of the women I have been with lately...James
Snow
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6 posted 2001-01-15 03:40 PM


awwwwww, this is so sweet..
I hope you get your wish.

Snow

Sven
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7 posted 2001-01-15 07:25 PM


they do work out wonderfully James. . .

well done my friend. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Nate Dogg
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8 posted 2001-01-16 12:22 PM


Ahhh, this is sweet James...enjoyed the lovely write!!

Nathan

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2001-01-19 06:27 PM


Thank you Snow, Sven and Nate...James
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