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To Dance The Four Winds
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To Dance The Four Winds |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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To Dance The Four Winds ~*Marge Tindal*~  maiden dancer dance the four winds prance your dress of chance blown by the breezes across time billowing within the chasms of chime maiden dancer, dance the four winds to the ways of ancient spirits unfurl enchantment found in the windy whirl taking place in the encircling breezes maiden dancers engulf the four winds catacombs of time-blown tradition to the maiden dancers of the four winds ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl, wonderful, it is always it's style ever yours, it's form beauty, and yes I adore it. Absolutely without doubt a real beauty Take care love Mushy Thank you kid  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
ahh the images your muse of the spirit conjure up ... sky dancers in the clouds so very cool margie-girl ... love this one dont ya know jm |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
another marvelous jewel from your hand. love it Marge...excellent as always. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Talks to me on many levels, as you knew it would...this is wonderful, and I am so glad to hear this song... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Marge, What a wonderful piece to add to your collection native American culture. I love these poems of yours They are so comforting and peaceful. What a joy to read Liz |
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Soaringeagle Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 156CANADA |
LOVELY WRITE......WHAT MEMORIES SHE BRINGS YOU MAKE HER DANCE WITH JOY......... KAMMAGAR |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marsha~ How much I love to share these little visions that come to me. Thank you my friend. JanetMarie~ My little SkyeLara whirled with delight in bringing this one. Thank you so much. Charisma~ She sparkled like a jewel in her dress of many colors. I'm so pleased to know you enjoyed her dance. Karilea~ The lilting voice of her song came in a treasured moment. I'm so pleased that she left this vision with me. Elizabeth, my friend~ Thank you for enjoying the peaceful dance of the maiden. SoaringEagle~ To stir a memory in your heart is enough to make me want to dance with joy. I truly appreciate you sharing it with Sarah Sweetwater. I think she will find herself in it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a beautiful vision you've shared Marge ... wonderfully descriptive, a delightful image!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Marge~ I love this and the words fit perfectly with the picture. Applauding for you! Love it! Deb |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
MARGE, this poem is superb... A delightful read and I thank you... ~*coco*~ |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Marge--A wonderful write and image...a pleasure to read. Poeminister |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kit~ I believe they are made for sharing. Thank you for a wonderful reply. BloomingRose~ Thanks, my friend. She dances the winds and I'm glad to know you enjoyed it. Dani~ I always love knowing you have shared in a piece I've written. I thank you so much. PoeMinister~ I'm pleased that it gave you the pleasurable thoughts I sought to capture. Thanking you for the reply. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
STANDING OVATION!!! Excellent poem, Marge! This speaks with such spiritual wonder and wisdom and such breathtaking images! May the four winds forever scarf us with the remedies and wonders of being! Thank you for sharing, my friend! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
And yet again I am simply amazed at the beauty your words reveal Marge. Wow, such incredible images are running through my mind now... Bonnie |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Noah~ Thank you so much for catching the spirituality in this piece. I appreciate your comments very much. Bonnie~ To know that the image dances in another's eyes must be the very reason I write - May you dance the dance of great joy - breezing in on the four winds. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ this feels so free, so uplifting.......beautifully done! -SEA |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Can you guess????????? Print, frame, nail!!!!!!!!!! Yeppers right along with the buffalo my friend. These are always your best and you know that I will never quit collecting them. Truely beautiful in verse and in spirit. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge, you've got me dancing on the winds with this beautiful write. Write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Thanks so much, hon. She's an uplifting spiritual muse for sure. MarkB~ Have I told you today that I love you ? Well, now I have. Thank you, darling. Kethry~ I thank you so much too, hon. It was a delightful spirit dancing. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Kansas is named for the Kansa Indians... "People of the South Wind", but I suspect you were aware of that... whenever you pen of the spirits and of your heritage, you take you poetry to a higher plane Marge... a true pleasure to experience. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mike~ Yes, I am familiar with the Kansa/Kaw -People of the South Wind. They have been recorded from the 1500's - 1848 in North America. Charles Curtis, who was vice president of the United States under President Herbert Hoover, was a celebrated tribal member. The Vision Quest was an honored tradition to young men of the tribe upon reaching puberty. Shucks, you probably already know all of this, but maybe we can share with others. Thanks so much for your interest in my heritage writings. They sit very close to my heart. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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cathybohannan Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 140Paintsville,KY |
Marge,it was a pleasure to read this poem, what a wonderful choice of words. Cathy |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cathy~ Thank you so much for letting me know how much you enjoyed it. I treasure your response. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Marge, your work is always enchanting, I can see your smile through each word. Robert Joseph |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Applause! This is gorgeous, and what a clever presentation! I love it when you write of your heritage. This was so magical and flowed so well. Heck, I just felt like I danced the four winds upon your words Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RJ~ Thank you so very much for your kind comments. Melissa~ This one was a treasured gift to my heart. And ... upon the winds you shall dance, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
BEautiful and how did you get the shape to come out so exactly smooth on the sides. It's amazing! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
A most beautiful spirit lies within the poet a most beautiful piece Margie, well penned~HUGS~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VAS~ I thank you. When SkyeLara dances - she twirls the words in her own way. Her magic is of transformation into the 'shapes' of her happiness. Sometimes I have to 'tweak' a word or two - but she's pretty precise in her movements across the page. I really wish I could tell you more - but is it okay to say that - it just happens ? Tracie~ You know that I appreciate seeing your reply. I know you are aware of the spirit dancing in this piece. Thank you, sweetie. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely, Marge, so very lovely! Denise |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Marge~ Indeed this is a beautiful dance.....what a lovely image your words paint.... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ How your sweet friendship dances in my heart. Thank you so much. GreenEyes~ And in the dancing of SkyeLara the words were emblazoned on the page. I appreciate your read. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RJ~ Thank you soooooo much. To know that you see my smile is to give me another one. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RJ~ Thank you so very much for leaving a reply. I obviously missed it and I apologize for that. *These heritage pieces are from the very core of my being ... and I so appreciate knowing they are enjoyed. Thank you ALL ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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