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Agust P
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since 2000-12-29

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0 posted 2001-01-13 12:17 PM

LUV

I was wandering
lost and without direction
and it was cold out there

then I met you and I said
"can you tell me the direction?"
and you were laughing as always
"I’m your direction"
you said
and it was sunshine
in a green valley
with blue flowers
and you

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-01-13 01:20 PM

This is wonderful! I met a guy who told me he had some direction for me...

this likes me!

Agust P
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since 2000-12-29

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2 posted 2001-01-14 11:44 AM

thanks very much Sunshine, I appreciate your comment, AP

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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3 posted 2001-01-14 11:47 AM

(sigh) Beautiful! Yes, may the sunshine of love forever gleam upon both of you! This was very lovely! Thank you for sharing, my friend!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

4 posted 2001-01-14 11:57 AM

lovely images indeed..

~V~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

Agust P
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since 2000-12-29

Posts 157

5 posted 2001-01-15 08:08 AM

thank you for your very nice comments Mistletoe Angel and Victoria, AP

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

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The Shores of Alone

6 posted 2001-01-15 02:24 PM

Isn't it interesting how every poem leads us to think of something in our own experiece? I remembered while reading this, when a man said "you are my destiny". It quite took my breath away at the time, though of course later, it turned out to be untrue.
Anyway, so much for the personal reminiscence. This is a great poem.
Sandra

Agust P
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since 2000-12-29

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7 posted 2001-01-16 12:51 PM

just want to say thanks to you Sandra for your nice comment

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30

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Spring, Texas

8 posted 2001-01-28 11:26 AM

Saw and felt it my friend, nicely done.

jwesley

CD
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since 2001-01-27

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9 posted 2001-01-28 11:35 AM

Your poem truly does convey that small but eternally important feeling that we all have felt and feel it time and again.

It's short and great.

I like a lot.

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

10 posted 2001-01-28 12:08 PM

AgustP~
I saw a pleasant smile emanating from this piece.
Wonderfully said.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Agust P
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since 2000-12-29

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11 posted 2001-01-29 08:35 AM

thanks for your nice comments jwesley, CD and Marge, it means a lot to me, AP

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

12 posted 2001-01-29 09:08 AM

AP.......i like this......& direction is everything isn't it? helen

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