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Whistling Winds |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Whistling Winds Through whispering pines the voices are heard The windswept twitter of a wintering bird Echoes of chill through the needley pine Are whistling winds and the howling of time Musical sounds of the sparkling white Are fantasy icicles chiming at night Through evergreen branches so briskly they slice The tingling music of wintry ice The wind brushes sparkly crystals of snow Crackling across window panes as they go There’s nothing to fear on a dark icy night For the winter plays musical songs of delight Crackley , tingly, whistling sweep The voices of winter will put you to sleep Elizabeth Santos |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I could imagine a clear icy night and the wind rattling the windowpanes (and at my house that happens easily, lol). Thanks for painting such a beautiful winter scene! |
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Agust P Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 157 |
a beautiful painting, I liked it very much, AP |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
E. S., And a nice winter nightcap this is. cold, yet cozy somehow. Krawdad |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Wonderful! Especially the last two lines! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
"needley pines"...what memories this evokes of a California day from my long ago... thank you for sharing, Lady Santos... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Just a little BTTT for those that didn't see it the first time.... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth~ I could just hug Karilea's neck for bumping this beauty ! (Hug)Karilea !  Lizzie ... you write the beauty of nature so that it is enjoyed by all. I can't imagine myself enjoying an icy winter - but you kept me warm in your rendition. Lovely imagery. Be warm, be happy ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Though the theme of this is icy, it has a charming ane warm feel to it. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is beautiful Liz..and though we DID get snow here in the desert this week, we don't often get the chance to go to sleep to the sounds of winter. May we use this in an upcoming issue of Digital Passions?  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Another epopee this is wonderful. Sy |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
THank you for your kind remarks. I had forgotten all about this poem and was surprised to see it again THanks LIz |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Ah yes. . . breathing deep the winter's air. . . Wonderful Liz. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Well I don't know how anyone could forget this poem. You know I love a poem filled with nature's imagery and this one is so refreshing and so beautifully done that it will stand up agaist the strongest of coldest of winds. If you find yourself stranded in a storm ...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is sooooo lovely, Elizabeth!! It has a nice warm cozy feel to it.....nothing like a cold night under a warm comforter listening to those winter time sounds!! Denise |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I am going to try the pattern of two lines at the end, I have not done that and you do it soooo well... "I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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