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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2001-01-13 09:19 AM


Is love that fuzzy feeling
you get way down deep inside,
is it that certain thing
that makes people run and hide?

Does it make your heart skip a beat
with a single glance,
is it soft lights and music
passionate nights filled with romance?

Is it tried and true
solid as a stone,
does it leaving you feeling empty
when it has left you all alone?

Does love make you swoon
and leave your mind to ponder,
does it fill your heart with joy
or make it feel asunder?

Love can be sweet bliss
a broken heart is taint,
I might not know what love is
but I sure know what it ain't!

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On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free.
Donna Smith



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Charisma
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1 posted 2001-01-13 03:54 PM


you named it all, and love contains so many more, ....enjoyed reading it.

((hugs))
Charisma

Sven
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2 posted 2001-01-13 07:29 PM


I've asked myself this for a long time. . . thanks for the answers. . .

Loved the ending. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

DYME
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3 posted 2001-01-13 09:48 PM


BEAUTIFUL. STRAIGHT AND TO THE POINT. YOU REALLY DO KNOW WHAT LOVE AIN'T!! LOVED IT. SMOOCHES!!

DYME

NO WEAPON FORMED AGAINST ME SHALL PROSPER... ISAIAH 54:17

BloomingRose
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4 posted 2001-01-13 09:57 PM


I think it's all these and more.
Great poem!
Deb

Mark Bohannan
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5 posted 2001-01-13 10:31 PM


Wonderful read from you.  I really like you taking on trying to define love and you have done a marvelous job in doing so.  There is so much to love that it could never all be penned nor even expressed but you have made a great start.  
jwesley
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6 posted 2001-01-13 11:03 PM


Definitely all those things, my friend, and it certainly helps to know what it "ain't"!

jwesley

Poeminister
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7 posted 2001-01-13 11:03 PM


Wonderful write...enjoyed the read.

Poeminister

tracie66
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8 posted 2001-01-13 11:31 PM



Love is many things  
This piece you have penned well, enjoyed
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



dgvarner
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9 posted 2001-01-13 11:45 PM


love is so many things..and in so many different ways..    

the good the bad and the ugly of it..its worth it..  

all the same..we ask dont we...!  nice write..

hugs, g


"a love declared for days to come, is as good as none" -tracy chapman

Lady Lightning
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10 posted 2001-01-14 01:46 AM


You said it so well, these things and so much more it is...     I loved the feeling I got while reading this..Great read..Thanks... ~LL~

The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

CocoBaci
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11 posted 2001-01-14 02:06 AM


GS, this poem brought out the smiles tonite...
Such a sweet write and I thank you
*~coco~*

Gentle Spirit
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12 posted 2001-01-14 11:02 AM


Oh I wish I had more time to be here than what I do. You have all been so kind in your replies to my words and I am so very grateful.   I was sitting one day pondering all of the things that love is, and the twist to the ending came when I realized that none of us never really KNOW what love is, but we all have an idea of what it "ain't"   Thanks all so much and peace my friends.  {HUGS)

On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free.
Donna Smith


vandana
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13 posted 2001-01-14 12:29 PM


enjoy the read
Gentle Spirit
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14 posted 2001-01-14 02:34 PM


Thanks much Vandana.  

On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free.
Donna Smith


Kethry
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15 posted 2001-01-14 02:42 PM


Gentle Spirit,
you're right! I too know what it ain't. Thought provoking write.
write on
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



Gentle Spirit
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16 posted 2001-01-15 05:52 AM


Thanks Kethry, I appreciate the visit.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free.
Donna Smith


Dark Angel
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17 posted 2001-01-15 05:55 AM


I might not know what love is
but I sure know what it ain't!

It certainly helps to know what it aint!

enjoyed very much  

Maree

                                


I need a lullaby
a kiss goodnight
Angel sweet love of my life
Oh, I need this

~Natalie Merchant~

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