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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-01-13 05:40 AM


Michelle my belle
  perhaps I'm falling
    within your spell.

Will you take
  this opportunity
   to share a romantic
    dance with me?

I enjoy your smile
  and your company.
   I desire each kiss
    you give to me.

I'll do my best
  to do my part.
   I promise Michelle
    with all my heart.

My words are simple
  yet they are true.
   Michelle I want to
    share my life with you.

Jameslee@January12,2001
ForthelovelyMichelle.





[This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 01-13-2001).]

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tracie66
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1 posted 2001-01-13 06:19 AM


James I do hope she's seen this already, It's a beautiful, tender write...well penned
~HUG~
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



ethome
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2 posted 2001-01-13 06:20 AM


Beautiful well done write James!
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2001-01-14 02:33 PM


Thank you Tracie and ethome I sincerely appreciate it...James
Kethry
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4 posted 2001-01-14 02:34 PM


James,
what a lucky Michelle she is.
Write on
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



Nate Dogg
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5 posted 2001-01-14 03:00 PM


A simple yet lovely poem...wonderful piece!

Nathan

Jamie
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6 posted 2001-01-14 04:03 PM


sont des monts qui vont tres bien ensemble
tres bien ensemble.




Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


Sven
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7 posted 2001-01-14 04:47 PM


well, seeing as Jamie beat me to the punch. . .I'll just say that this is great from you James. . .



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JamesMichael
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8 posted 2001-01-18 04:00 PM


Thank you Kethry, Nate, Jamie and Sven...you make my heart happy with your nice responses...James
Honeybee
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9 posted 2001-01-18 04:04 PM



James~

This just gives me a toothache, it is just so sweet   At first, I thought it was a tribute to the Beatles LOL     But, I am pleasantly surprised to see that it is a love poem for your Michelle.  A truly lovely dedication! This would be a great Valentines gift to her!

Take care,
Melissa
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[This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 01-18-2001).]

Martie
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10 posted 2001-01-18 04:32 PM


James--This caught my heart when I saw the title, it was my daughter's name and her song...and you have written a beautiful love song to another lovely Michelle..I wish you well!
SEA
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11 posted 2001-01-18 04:34 PM


James~ this is so beautiful......I have high hopes for you!!   -SEA
Charisma
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12 posted 2001-01-18 04:35 PM


James I hope that she will share this romantic dance with you.

lovely piece my friend.

((hugs))
Charisma

JamesMichael
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13 posted 2001-01-24 05:48 AM


Thank you Melissa, Martie, Sea and Charisma...James
Frankie
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14 posted 2001-01-24 02:18 PM


James - Very tender and loving.

Frankie

wayoutwalt
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15 posted 2001-01-24 02:22 PM


umm hehe yuh these are words that go together well

that kinda sounds like tres bien ensemble but i would not know

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