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Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri

0 posted 2001-01-13 03:37 AM


Theres someone new
   who wants this heart
And he doesnt care
   that its not whole

Theres someone new
   who looked at me
And didnt see
   a grounded dove

Theres someone new
   who took a chnace
Who believed in love
   who believed in me

Theres someone new
   who reached out his hand
And lifted me up
   out of my exile

Theres someone new
   who loves me so
And with his love
   I've learned to fly



© Copyright 2001 Paula Finn - All Rights Reserved
Jesse Jaymz
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since 2000-01-24
Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio
1 posted 2001-01-13 03:39 AM


GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!  and congats.  i love this peice as i have told you.   heart warming and touching.  just as beautiful as you.     love it
love ya
jesse


True beauty is often hidden in darkness...

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

2 posted 2001-01-13 04:35 AM


there's someone new
who writes in song
I knew she sang
there all along...

congrats, Ms. Paula...

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
3 posted 2001-01-13 05:15 AM


This is so beatiful Paula and I'm so happy for you  
CONGRATS on 3000 posts, this one is a great way to celebrate it...well done
~HUGS~
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2001-01-13 05:26 AM


Happy to read this Paula...out with the old and in with the new...congratulations on 3000 posts...James
Marsha
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since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England
5 posted 2001-01-13 05:36 AM


Paula love, what a truly amazing and beautiful piece, and what a delicious and delightful poem to celebrate with.

C O N G R A T U L A T I O N S

This is truly a weekend of spectatular wonder for me. A real beauty from my sister of the phoenix, and you are love flying high and free. If only I knew how to do all the clever graphic bits I'd give you an awesome display of confeti glitter and balloons, but i can't so instead I give you my heartfelt wondrous and superb and so many hugs. Love you kid, and this is wonderful
Take care love
                  Mushy
                    
(Exits stage right muttering, and looking full of mischief. )  


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
6 posted 2001-01-13 06:47 AM


Beautiful heartfelt expressions Paula! Well written! Draws the reader to the newborn gladness and makes them a part of it!! Good job!  To the head of the class again!

[This message has been edited by ethome (edited 01-13-2001).]

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
7 posted 2001-01-13 06:53 AM


I forgot to wish you CONGRATS!!!!!! on your 3000th.......I wish you many many more... ethome
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

8 posted 2001-01-13 07:03 AM


Way cool Paula-girlie...
Congrats on your milestone post ...
sweet song of promise to mark it with ...
heres to your next 3000 ... may they all be inspired by your heart smiling
jm

Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
9 posted 2001-01-13 07:19 AM


You look great with something NEW and I can't think of a more deserving person...Congrat's on 3000 Paula, it's been a joy to watch your poetry grow with each post and to see you weaving with the heart of gold that beats within you~

You can swim in the waves of the weave...without sinking into the mind of the weaver~


Victoria
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since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869

10 posted 2001-01-13 09:17 AM


Congratulations on 3000th Paula..thats alot of posts ha.. Keep writing

              ~V~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
11 posted 2001-01-13 09:25 AM


very cool..this someone new...   great write!

hugs, g


"oh baby baby, its a wild world..its hard to get by just upon a smile..." cat stevens

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
12 posted 2001-01-14 03:10 AM


Jesse...thanks thats so sweet of you

Serenity...a song to sing...music for the heart...a new love a new life...a chance at a new start...thanks

Tracies...thank you I never thought Id make it this far LOL

James...lol only you could say that darlin...thanks

Marsha...you are all the glitz and glitter I need sweet sister mine...thank you...uh oh look out Passions she's up to something hehehe

ethome...LOL oh goodie goodie...does that mean I get an A? Thank you...and thank you for coming back again

Janet...dont know if I can get through another 3000 without a tear but Im sure gonna try LOL...thanks

Holly...having you with me each and very step of the way has been a blessing sweet lady...hugs

Victoria...LMAO yeah it sure is...you arent that far off yourself...thank you

dgvarner...yep he sure is...thanks


Daniel J D
Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia
13 posted 2001-01-14 03:12 AM


Paula,
A special congrat from me on 3000, very well done. Be in touch.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043

14 posted 2001-01-14 03:14 AM


Paula, this is sooooooo pretty...
Congratulations on 3000th sweetie...
*~coco~*

Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada
15 posted 2001-01-14 03:27 AM


Wonderful write.. congrats on 3000th!!

Poeminister

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
16 posted 2001-01-14 04:23 AM


Paula, love
congratulations on the 3000th post may you have many more.
And congratulations on the new relationship! Well done.
write on
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



Charisma
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since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906
lost in blue pages
17 posted 2001-01-14 08:17 AM


Fabulous write.....what a wonderful way to celebrate your milestone.

Congratulations with 3000th

(((hugs)))
Charisma

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
18 posted 2001-01-14 10:18 AM


Congratulations, my twin.........
and here's to brand new beginnings!!  


Write on!
-<--<--{(@



Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
19 posted 2001-01-14 10:27 AM


Congrats on your 3000th and on your new start.  You deserve the best that there is out there.  Wonderful write and so nice to see you happy again.
Sven
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
20 posted 2001-01-14 05:16 PM


it's pretty wonderful what a new start can bring isn't it Paula??  

wonderful poem and Congrats on the 3,000th!!!

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

SEA
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Member Seraphic
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Posts 22676
with you
21 posted 2001-01-14 05:26 PM


YAHOO FOR YOU!!!
I am so happy for you!  
CONGRATULATIONS ON 3000!

~SEA

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