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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2001-01-13 01:11 AM


When I first met you,
My whole world changed,
Every day had meaning,
My life was rearranged,

When I first met you,
Our Hearts melted together,
I thought of you every hour,
We became lost into forever,

When I first met you,
My heart was awakened from sleep,
New visions came into view,
Words well treasured was hidden deep,

When I first met you,
That instant, that memory, embeded in my mind,
Has changed me, awakened me forever,
Our first meeting, our hearts were bleeding,
A moment I treasure, frozen in time.

© Copyright 2001 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
Breathe~
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since 2000-02-05
Posts 315
Washington...
1 posted 2001-01-13 01:14 AM


Ahhhhhh...to be in love...

Perfect interpretation...


I love the time
and in between
the calm inside me
in the space
where I can breathe...

Sarah McLachlan

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2001-01-13 05:30 AM


"My heart was awakened from sleep."  Enjoyed your poem Romantic...nice to see you...James
Lady Lightning
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since 2000-12-04
Posts 422
Kentucky
3 posted 2001-01-13 06:12 AM


Such sweet thoughts about being in love..I really liked this... Hugs... ~LL~

The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
4 posted 2001-01-13 06:17 AM


ARH~
What beautiful images, truly a devine write....well done
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
5 posted 2001-01-13 06:22 AM


Beautiful romantic poem ARH!
Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
6 posted 2001-01-13 08:46 AM


RH,

Ain't love grand?  This was wonderful.  It is always nice to look back at those frozen moments we will always treasure.  I like this one.  

LW


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Parker
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since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129
ON
7 posted 2001-01-13 06:35 PM


ARH, wonderful poem. Must have been a very sweet meeting... and its so nice to see you back here. We miss your words.  

Parker

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