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DYME
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since 2000-07-29
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0 posted 2001-01-13 12:49 PM


This Feeling                 **1/8/01**
Words could never explain my love for you
It goes deeper than any word on a page
No money could ever replace emotions this strong
No mile could ever measure up to this feeling
I can't begin to tell you how real you make me feel
I'd give any and everything to feel this forever
It's hard to hold back love as strong as this
So why should I even try?

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This is for you Chris. I love you with all my heart.

Dyme

NO WEAPON FORMED AGAINST ME SHALL PROSPER... ISAIAH 54:17

© Copyright 2001 Shunte' D. - All Rights Reserved
maxtec1
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1 posted 2001-01-13 01:07 AM


great writing. I enjoyed the read.
Love and light,
Richard

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2 posted 2001-01-14 04:58 PM


power of love .....strong feelings, penned with love. penned with love...lovely piece.
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