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Charisma
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0 posted 2001-01-12 04:26 PM





Open Mind

Soul with open mind
branches reaching out for light
searching for new hope

Charisma


© Copyright 2001 Theresia A. Makatita-Poortman - All Rights Reserved
sandgrain
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1 posted 2001-01-12 04:36 PM


What a wonderful world it would be should each soul be so open!  Super!   Rae
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2 posted 2001-01-12 04:40 PM


sunsets of beauty
closed minds never see the light
dark falls solemnly

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3 posted 2001-01-12 05:47 PM


Charisma sweetie, this is a fabulous write...
*~coco~*

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4 posted 2001-01-12 05:48 PM


Excellent comparison with the image...very beautiful.  I like this muchly.

Poeminister

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5 posted 2001-01-13 04:22 PM


Sandgrain: yes than it would be a wonderful world, thank you for reading and your comment.

Karilea: wonderful....reply....I love it a lot.

Coco: thank you for your lovely comment, it's always nice to have them from you.  

poeminister: thank you my friend, and I am so glad that you liked it.  

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6 posted 2001-01-13 08:56 PM


What a wonderfully inspirational verse Charisma ... beautifully penned, and so very true!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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7 posted 2001-01-17 07:18 AM


thank you Kit for your lovely and kind response.


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Charisma~ such a beautiful thought...makes me smile   -SEA
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9 posted 2001-01-18 02:34 AM


What a wonderful way to present your inspiration for the day.   I try to never close my mind to the possibilities of tomorrow even if they do only carry dream status today.  Thank you for such a lovely piece of art.
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10 posted 2001-01-18 08:09 AM


I think this one is special! I like, alot!

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.



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11 posted 2001-01-18 03:25 PM


Sea: love it to see you smile, glad that you liked it.

Mark: thank you for your wonderful compliment, yeah its up to us to be open for new spirit.......new way of life or hope....and  we can find that in nature too.

Eagle One: I am so glad for these special one...thank you

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12 posted 2001-01-18 03:34 PM


Charisma,not to take away from your brilliant write...
SUNSHINE OF THE SOUL
CREATES THE LIGHT FOR LEARNING
EVER SEEKING PEACE!

Keth


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



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13 posted 2001-01-18 03:45 PM


Yes we reach out and life embraces us..James
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Lovely, Charisma...you've got it!!!
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15 posted 2001-01-18 04:08 PM



Yes! Yes!  Wonderful!   you're so good at haikus

Take care,
Melissa


The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams



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16 posted 2001-01-20 10:45 AM


Kethry: thank you for your wonderful reply...love these words.  
love your inspiration in this one hon

James: yes we do... my friend.

Vas: thank you for your compliment


Melissa: thank you my friend, its because that I love these forms, they are so special.
glad that you love it.


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17 posted 2001-02-19 06:24 PM


hi Charisma,

i read something about you wanting to give up your writing...

please dont, you know what pleasure it gives me to be able to witness your growth in haiku/tankas...

write on!

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18 posted 2001-02-22 09:17 AM


Kaile: thank you for your concerness...and don't worry I don't quit with writing.
I am only very busy as I have to move my homepage, its nearly done but want to upload more poetry.
It takes more time than I thought as I had to removed for the second time my homepage, and also making alot of backgrounds by myself.

but I truly hope to return soon to the blue pages, as I missed you all.

take care my friend.

((hugs))
Charisma

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