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The Blue Ocean... (Semi-Live Poetry Recital by Parker) now with a smaller version of the mp3 sound file. Hope that loads better.

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dgvarner
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25 posted 01-13-2001 05:11 PM       View Profile for dgvarner   Email dgvarner   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dgvarner

well love..i'm mush..that soft calming voice...read whatever you like..it could be a boring read and still send me chills...  

but boring would not come from your pen love.. this is beautiful..

read to me anytime..closer..i cant hear you love..just a little closer.....  

hugs...g


"oh baby baby, its a wild world..its hard to get by just upon a smile..." cat stevens
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26 posted 01-13-2001 05:29 PM       View Profile for kcsgrandma   Email kcsgrandma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit kcsgrandma's Home Page   View IP for kcsgrandma

This is lovely, and how clever of you to add the sound file!  It was a real treat to listen to it.  I wish we could hear all the poets this way.  

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn
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27 posted 01-13-2001 05:48 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Hey Handsome   just came back to add your sexy voice.......ummm, I mean your wonderful poem to my library   ~HUGS   -SEA
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28 posted 01-13-2001 06:21 PM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma

okay..ok...I know....for the third time today I come once again in, and just as Sea I want to make a thread....forgot to do that earlier.
  

Charisma
Parker
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29 posted 01-14-2001 12:07 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Charisma, thank you very much.  

Kit, thank you very much.  

serenity, thank you... can't wait to hear the terms of your contract.  

Marge, thank you very much.  

Mark, thank you very much.  

Coco, thank you.  

Martie, thank you, I sent you a copy hope that downloads for you.  

dg, maybe I could whisper in your ear would that be close enough.  

kcsgrandma, thank you... maybe this one will start a trend.  

SEA, please do, thank you cutie.  

Charisma, back again...  

Parker
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30 posted 01-14-2001 12:41 PM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

First of all....your voice is so smooth like satin. Secondly, the poem was beautiful. I had my husband listen to it and his comments were "Man that guy is awesome!" This comes from a man who writes no poetry, but feels it when presented well, and this was fantastic! I agree with the others....this is how poetry should be done. I can now say I don't regret kicking out the 56k and going with cable.

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When the dark comes right in and takes me,
from my front walk and into bed,
where it kisses my face and eats my head. Shivaree
dgvarner
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31 posted 01-14-2001 06:18 PM       View Profile for dgvarner   Email dgvarner   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dgvarner

ah yes love..THAT would be nice...    


                                        


"oh baby baby, its a wild world..its hard to get by just upon a smile..." cat stevens
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32 posted 01-15-2001 01:55 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Wildchild, thank you very much, and tell your husband I thank him too.  
Cable rules  

dg, i'll have to come up with something sweet to whisper.  

Parker
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33 posted 01-15-2001 08:47 PM       View Profile for Honeybee   Email Honeybee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Honeybee

WOW!

*sigh* sigh...sigh...sigh, did I mention that your gentle voice and your words made me sigh?     This is absolutely phenomenal and BEAUTIFUL and haunting! I can relate and I feel every word! Where the heck have I been     I can't believe that I missed this gem for so long.  The download was worth the wait, what a treat.  You choose perfect background music.  The theme, the flow, the expression, the thought, the unique lines were ALL perfect!  You should be so very proud of this.  I am sure that the others will agree with me when I say Thank You for treating us to this recital.  What a clever idea it was! - you may even be starting a new trend here.  You could even recite my poems (which do not compare to yours), you'd make even the most amateur poems sound wonderful!  

Take care,
Melissa




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[This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 01-15-2001).]
snowpants
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34 posted 01-15-2001 09:19 PM       View Profile for snowpants   Email snowpants   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit snowpants's Home Page   View IP for snowpants

Yes, my computer is slow!  But, as everyone else said, it was definitely worth the wait!  Excellent work!  I enjoyed every minute of it!

sp  


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35 posted 01-15-2001 10:24 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

You write them good Parker...James
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36 posted 01-16-2001 11:45 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Melissa, thank you very much, I think my voice still has a ways to go. Its interesting trying to keep an even tone with this stuff. Best advice for the medium, that I have is get a good software package that you don't have to cut and past alot.. cause its a pain....lol

snowpants, thank you very much.  

James, thanks good poet.  

Parker
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37 posted 01-16-2001 03:45 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Lovely haunting song, Park, I don't have a sound card here at work, but will definitely take a listen at home.

Cor
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38 posted 01-17-2001 06:40 PM       View Profile for insect   Email insect   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for insect

Excellent poem to read and hear
Great job on this one
Parker
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39 posted 01-19-2001 11:26 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Corinne, thank you for replying sweet poet. I don't think my voice could ever hold a candle to yours.  

Insect, thanks for bringing it up again.  

Parker
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40 posted 01-19-2001 02:56 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

I doubt that, Park.  I've heard your speaking voice before, ya know!

corinne
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41 posted 01-19-2001 03:03 PM       View Profile for dragonpoe   Email dragonpoe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dragonpoe

That was soo cool! What a beautiful poem, with the music, and hearing it read, that was just awesome. Loved it!


With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
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42 posted 01-20-2001 12:00 AM       View Profile for Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Email Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rosemary J. Gwaltney's Home Page   View IP for Rosemary J. Gwaltney

What a treat!  And what an unusual idea!  You wrote a beauty, and read it well, and the flute, well, I was in goose-bumps the whole way through.  Thank you very much!!!
I'm glad I'm paying for cable!
I've downloaded the longer version too, but can't listen to it right now.  But I will, as soon as my husband gets done writing what he's working on!  (We write in the same study.)
dgvarner
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43 posted 01-20-2001 01:46 AM       View Profile for dgvarner   Email dgvarner   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dgvarner

back..for another listen.. *sigh*      ....so whens the next recital--i dont want to be late..!

hugs, g
Parker
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44 posted 01-22-2001 12:19 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Corinne, well and I've heard your singing voice and there's nothing sweeter.  

dragonpoe, thank you very much.  

Rosemary, thank you, I know that song by Rita MacNeil is wonderful... get it at napster.  

dg, if I can ever fix my puter to record again. Soon I hope.  

Parker
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45 posted 03-24-2001 01:45 AM       View Profile for Dee   Email Dee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dee

Parker, I fell in love with a lot of your poems, so I went hunting and found this. Oh boy am I glad I did. This is truely awesome. I read the poem several times while it was downloading, but to hear you read it showed me what you really meant. That is what I love, to hear the poets version, not my idea of what it is. You are an amazing poet, thank you for sharing this with us all.
And I have to agree with the other ladies...the voice is pretty hot too.


Dee

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Parker
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46 posted 03-24-2001 03:24 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Dee, thank you very much. I'm surprised it loaded all the way down under.
Well, I may have to recite lace if I can find some good back ground music.

Parker
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47 posted 03-25-2001 05:56 PM       View Profile for Dee   Email Dee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dee

I think if you recite "Lace" you may have to put it in Adult! Some of the comments may belong there.

Dee

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Parker
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48 posted 03-26-2001 02:58 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Dee, I was just thinking the same thing tonight.

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49 posted 03-26-2001 03:00 AM       View Profile for thecraig   Email thecraig   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for thecraig

I felt afloat on calm water sea bird whistles on a light breeze. You Poem was good harmony.
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