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Poeminister
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0 posted 2001-01-12 01:14 PM



Sea Horse

Propelling forward
a lone Sea Horse armored swims
playing in the Deep

Poeminister

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1 posted 2001-01-12 01:47 PM


love it, great haiku.....wonderful done.

((hugs))
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2 posted 2001-01-12 02:33 PM


stretch and fold and stretch
racing, racing 'gainst the tide
seahorse, seahorse ride

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3 posted 2001-01-12 02:54 PM


I enjoy watching seahorses, thanks for the view!
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4 posted 2001-01-13 03:31 AM


I love to watch seahorses...the are so tiny and move with such grace and beauty...thanks for the lovely image
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5 posted 2001-01-13 03:33 AM


exactly what haiku should do.....
you painted a portrait in zen...

I YAM a fan yanno....

hugs, you.

Poeminister
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6 posted 2001-01-15 04:59 PM


Thankyou all for your comments...

Poeminister

Elizabeth Santos
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7 posted 2001-01-15 05:10 PM


Lovely image
Perfect haiku, with that little break
"A lone seahorse---armored swims"
Liz

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8 posted 2001-01-15 10:06 PM


Lovely   -SEA
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9 posted 2001-01-15 10:08 PM



Wonderfully penned, I love the last two lines - I could envision it clearly!  

Take care,
Melissa


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Poeminister
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10 posted 2001-01-16 02:06 AM


Thanks you.  Glad you guys liked.

Poeminister



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11 posted 2001-01-16 03:01 AM


Poeminister~
This is a little gem, just so beautiful. The seahorse is my favourite sea animal along with the dolphin...thanks for sharing this beauty  
~HUG~
Tracie~


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