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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2001-01-12 10:58 AM


Keys To Your Kingdom

The keys to your kingdom are smiles
Offered with sanctum embrace
Serviced by imply of your style
Court by your eyes and your face.

Fit to the will by attraction
Brought to fulfill in your heart
Touched by a mental reaction
Honesty brought to an art.

Sincerity's loft in subtle
Clarity's soft by a flair
And friendship without rebuttal
Charity beyond forbear.

Your kingdom lives within your smile
Sanctioned by your banal core
Your outstretched hand your common wile
Your search for the evermore.

There is no better path or goal
Then touch upon another soul.


© Copyright 2001 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-01-12 10:59 AM


Ah Sy....what friends you have that smile so well...and cause you to gift us with masterpieces...

this, this keeps me happy....

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2 posted 2001-01-12 11:08 AM


Touching my heart again, sy...or is that sigh? smiles and a gentle hug, m'friend.
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3 posted 2001-01-12 11:10 AM


I am smiling all day long now..

wonderful penned, and its smiling in my library now.

((hugs))
Charisma

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4 posted 2001-01-12 11:46 AM


Sincerity's loft in subtle
Clarity's soft by a flair
And friendship without rebuttal
Charity beyond forbear.

Your kingdom lives within your smile
Sanctioned by your banal core
Your outstretched hand your common wile
Your search for the evermore.

There is no better path or goal
Then touch upon another soul.
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keys to the kingdom, keys to me heart...
your poetry is a master key Sy-babes
very very cool write me Stinky ...
made me smile this morn ...me thanks ya
*winkiewinkie*
me

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2001-01-12 12:54 PM


Karilea,
To make you happy is my aim.
Isn't yours the same? *L*

Serenity,
There is no better path or goal
Then touch upon another soul. *L*

Charisma,
A smile a day keeps the frowns away. *L*

Janet Marie,
The warmth of your embrace
Has chased my blues debase.
Winkiewinkie Stinky

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6 posted 2001-01-12 12:56 PM


methinks you are in harmony
in pattered responsive poetry...
{~,^}

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7 posted 2001-01-12 01:07 PM


now Sy, if I can just get them all on a keychain. . .  

excellent my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2001-01-12 03:35 PM


Karilea,
On those answers yes. *L*

Sven,
Thanks for the excellent.

Sunshine
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9 posted 2001-03-20 12:04 PM


...my smile found this, and whoosh...it floated it's way back to the top....
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10 posted 2001-03-20 12:57 PM


I'm very iimpressed with this presentation.

Kathleen Blake

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and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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11 posted 2001-03-20 03:19 PM


Flows as smooth as honey on a spring day, Sey.


Especially liked:

Sincerity's loft in subtle
Clarity's soft by a flair
And friendship without rebuttal
Charity beyond forbear.
Corinne

Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2001-03-20 03:22 PM


Sunshine,
Thanks for the smile and whoosh. *L*

Irish,
Thanks for being impressed.

Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2001-03-20 05:59 PM


Corinne,
We must have crossed. Thank you for the wonderful comment.

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14 posted 2001-03-22 02:37 PM


You've reached the goal of touching our souls, dear Seymour... Your poems are the keys to knowing a delightful man... thank you for sharing them with us! *S*
Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 2001-03-22 02:49 PM


Suthern,
How sweet it is and how sweet you are. *L*

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16 posted 2001-03-22 03:18 PM


A smile and kind hand will make my day. You have done it all with the touch of your pen.
Thank you kind Sir!




Every minute you are angry, you lose 60 seconds of happiness.
- Ralph Waldo Emerson



Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 2001-03-22 03:27 PM


Into2B,
I can only repeat, how sweet it is and how sweet you are.

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