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lucky
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since 2000-01-17
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Idaho

0 posted 2001-01-12 10:53 AM


first a whispering
north Alberta clipper was rushing
over forth a wild & wilderness graceland
it was nature of course taking her course and
the whisper of wild winds came reeling for some
reason I wished I was back home again bound to
a wild restless spirit how can it be Alberta winter
snow calls me from wherever my reason and
thinking I’ve been deep inside & within I
glide away... way to soon for the
making but I shall return
again to your
endless
moons of
snow flakes
rain and yer winters
breath of love weeks and
months on end I’ll give to you
reflections Alberta in prayers
that I will send within love
& mend these times
you’ve been
myst

taking
~


[This message has been edited by lucky (edited 01-12-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Dale W. Gwaltney - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2001-01-12 08:54 PM


Very beautiful, Lucky! Very nicely done!

Denise

Beckalini
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2 posted 2001-01-12 08:56 PM


Once again lucky, you have painted the prettiest pictures in this lil head of mine, now I can go to bed, reassured that I'll have sweet dreams. Thank you  
~Becky~

Sunshine
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3 posted 2001-01-12 09:07 PM


Hey,...glad to see you...this is wonderful and I can hear the hornpipes, hey?...
Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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4 posted 2001-01-12 09:18 PM


Oh, honey, you take me back home with this one!  It is really something, how you can paint with your keyboard, a picture I can see, hear, feel ... excellently done!  (And I love your plays on words!)


Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2001-01-12 09:24 PM


Lucky~
I saw this beauty while I was at work today -
and knew a quick reply would not suffice.

Oh, just how much more beautiful could thoughts get ?
Not much, my friend.

I felt the call of the winds pulling you home -

'but I shall return
again to your
endless
moons of
snow flakes
rain and yer winters
breath of love'


For a haunting moment I was reminded of the beautiful song of Roger Whitaker - 'The Last Farewell'.

Superb, my friend.
I smile at knowing how this one played out through your heart.
~*Marge*~




~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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lucky
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since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601
Idaho
6 posted 2001-01-12 10:36 PM


Denise...

A nice surprise to see you... Thank you.

Becky...

  Thank you so much for painting my picture...

Sunny...

  Those are bagpipes... it was so nice too, God blessed us with them when we were married... your a real card Sis.., as my mother would say. Why don't you drop RJ. a line and tell us whats going on, lately, yesterday, how about today..?

always love.

Rosemary...

If we ever sell these darn houses I'm going to take you... well I can't talk about that, but you hear what I'm saying though, right..?

Marge,

You kind of caught me off guard... I had to go and look up Roger's... Then it all came back... Ya caught me Sis...

All my love everyone... dale

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