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lucky
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0 posted 01-12-2001 09:05 AM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for lucky

in the north when eagle
winter's claw latches to keep the law
of nature in control the poor rabbit onto the
dining table goes then sha-zam and the critter
in minuets is gone never to be seen or heard
again no one knows how mother flew the
sky for ours looking for the best-buy
and biggest deal around they
donít care that she
flew four
hours
in the
air around
town just for their

meal of hare then when the
darn short-tailed Leporidae was
gone mom had to mosey on over
to Jack in the Box for something
I think she said was called
a...... finch fry

~ ~ ~

it was one of those
days that Rosemary and
myself slaved in the kitchen
for hours and by the time
we sat down to eat
there was not
a morsel
left
~


[This message has been edited by lucky (edited 01-12-2001).]
© Copyright 2001 Dale W. Gwaltney - All Rights Reserved
Beckalini
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1 posted 01-12-2001 09:15 AM       View Profile for Beckalini   Email Beckalini   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beckalini

Gosh lucky, I really love the layout of this piece! And the words themselves are brilliant. I love how you're able to give the simplest of situations a mystical air. Perfect!
*Hugs*,
Becky
lucky
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2 posted 01-12-2001 12:50 PM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lucky

Thank you Becky,

I'll try an get an "e" off to you with more of our stuff. I don't get much response here other than Marge Tindal and Martie. Nice to see a new face...

Hugs to you too... dale
Martie
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3 posted 01-12-2001 01:36 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Hi lucky...now you have made me hungry...for haire and fince fries...and some more of your memories...can I come over for dinner?
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4 posted 01-12-2001 03:23 PM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma

wonderful penned....love the imagery inhere...and also the form.
excellent work


Charisma
Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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5 posted 01-12-2001 09:24 PM       View Profile for Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Email Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rosemary J. Gwaltney's Home Page   View IP for Rosemary J. Gwaltney

Very clever - sometimes you can make me laugh so hard!  (Martie too - grin!) You have told the story of the truth of the matter with your own, inimitable humor and style!  I don't think anyone could ever match it!
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6 posted 01-27-2003 12:00 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

clever indeed...very creative write!
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7 posted 05-06-2008 02:26 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

*chuckling*

I miss you lucky.

come back???

 
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