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tiny write.....my muse has gone on vacation :[
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tiny write.....my muse has gone on vacation :[ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia 
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A mothers touch Warmth of hand Guides us gently To softly land Upon a tender love Thats pure A mothers touch brings warmth For sure |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Tracie love, if you're muse is on holiday, then I'm a vir...tually innocent nun.  Wonderful dear heart as always, and yes it really is a beauty and a keeper.  Utterly delightful love Take care Mushy MM Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ She's resting on a chaise lounge by the pool here in Florida, and sends a postcard of love for this little gem. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your muse is NOT on vacation...she is just playing with brevity...which always packs a wallop! Well done Tracie... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I don't think I even have a "muse", but if I do then I hope she spends her vacations like your's does...well done. jwesley |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
what Sunshine said!!. . . sometimes my friend. . . you can say more with fewer words. . . excellent. . .  ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Your muse is just resting...if she were on vacation, you would not have written such a lovely little poem!  |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
excuse me....your muse on vacation? I don't think so my dear....wonderful touch from her right here. love it. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Thank you for this one, it was a soft touch on an otherwise cold day. I loved every word. "Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Tracie, I like this one my friend. Short and sweet. Full of warmth and love. ~HUGS~ LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Lovely write...I like this muchly. Poeminister |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Your muse is on vacation? Well if it passes through our neck of the woods, we'll give it one of those famous 'Tracie Hugs' and send it back to you. In the meantime, you're writing beautifully by yourself |
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Beckalini Member
since 2001-01-02
Posts 151Yorkshire, England |
I love this! Short, sweet, heart-felt....it captures all you want it to say. I'd say your muse got back from her vacation unexpectedly....just as you sat down to pen this! *smiles* ~Becky~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Tracie~ this Mommie, thanks you for this beautiful gem -SEA |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
MM~ Sweet comments as always from you sweetie and you knoe I appreciate it ~HUG~ Tracie~ .....LOL Margie thanks, tell her from me I'm missing her so and she better get home quick, cause I'm going insane without her  ~HUG~ to you and my lounge chair muse  Tracie~ Oh sunshiny, I guess you could be right....thanks ~HUG~ Tracie~ jwesley~ I've read your work my friend and indeed you do have one thanks for your lovely reply~HUG~ Tracie~ Sven~ You are so right my dear friend...thanks ~HUG~ Tracie~ Awww thanks PdV...true ~HUG~ Tracie~ Charis~ Thanks for that hon and the ((Hugs)) winged ~HUGS~ right back at ya Tracie~ Kathleen~ So glad you liked this one sweetie...thanks for your lovely reply ~HUG~ Tracie~ LW~ My sweet friend I'm so glad you liked and sending winged ~HUGS~ straight back to ya Tracie~ Poeminister~ Thanks glad you enjoyed ~HUG~ Tracie~ Rex~ Loved that reply...thanks ~HUG~ ~HUG~ Tracie~ Becka~ great reply sweetie...thanks ~HUG~ Tracie~ < !signature--> Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 01-12-2001).] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
SEA~ So sorry sweetie didn't mean to skip you, appreciate your warm reply winged ~HUGS~ floating your way Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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