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Kethry
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0 posted 2001-01-12 01:39 AM


Dusk to dawn I wait
Now to rest, the torch I offer
to my brother sun.

I his sister moon
have cooled the night for him
blazoned it with stars

True light is now required
not mere reflection of his grace
the clouds await his welcome touch
shine on brother sun

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Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life.  Patty Hansen.





[This message has been edited by Kethry (edited 01-13-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Lynne Dale - All Rights Reserved
Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2001-01-12 01:49 AM


Great response to Sven's post.  I knew it would be.  Now on with the series.
Paula Finn
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missouri
2 posted 2001-01-12 02:03 AM


This is good stuff kid...perfect images

Life's a game...but who says you have to follow the rules?



Kethry
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3 posted 2001-01-12 02:17 AM


Mark and Paula,
Thanks! this was literally an unplanned response to Sven's brother sun. Although we'd talked about doing a joint series, I did not expect him to post so soon or so well and I certainly did not expect him to dob me in, in his prelude.
be well
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.


tracie66
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4 posted 2001-01-12 06:52 AM


Keth~
Beautiful write, you've done well  
~HUG~
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Marsha
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5 posted 2001-01-12 07:03 AM


Kethry love, Well if he hadn't (dobbed you in love, do keep up) I would have done. You know I love this one, and it is as always beautiful. It has such a perfect flow love. Excellant work, sending you back my love and loud cheers of Bravi Bravi Bravisimi. (I could have waved a flag too, but I haven't got one to hand, and I am not going hunting flags at this time of day  )
Take care love
                  Slushy
                      


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2001-01-12 07:39 AM


Kethry~
Ohhhhhhhh, I like it !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sunshine
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7 posted 2001-01-12 08:38 AM


I so enjoy opening up Passions [like a favorite, cherished book] and finding new surprises every day!  Write on little one!
Janet Marie
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8 posted 2001-01-12 12:17 PM


shine on sister moon....
VERY COOL Keth ... VERY!!!
keep em coming  
jm

No one ever told me ... I could get lost while standing still ...
and sorrow doesnt make a sound ... as it takes away all your will.


Sven
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9 posted 2001-01-12 01:12 PM


Surprise!!

Great job Kethry. . . perfect response to mine. . . this is a great idea that you had. . .

More on the way!!  

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Charisma
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10 posted 2001-01-12 02:13 PM


oh my....wonderful done kethry...love these serie.

((hugs))
Charisma

Kethry
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11 posted 2001-01-13 05:16 AM


Thanks everyone for reading both Sven's and yo paired poems. A true collaboration is coming, promise even if I have to write it all myself.*laughs*
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



Gentle Spirit
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12 posted 2001-01-13 09:10 AM


Beautiful Kethry, I love the way you did this one.  *s*  Peace.

On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free.
Donna Smith


Kethry
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13 posted 2001-01-13 09:51 PM


Gentle Spirit,
thanks
Kethry.


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



Poeminister
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14 posted 2001-01-13 11:35 PM


Wonderfully done...enjoyed the read.

Poeminister

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O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
-Poe


jwesley
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15 posted 2001-01-13 11:44 PM


Did good!! Yep, yep, yep!

jwesley

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