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KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

0 posted 2001-01-12 01:38 AM

passionate eclipse
sun wrapped around glowing moon
morning ambrosia
emotional concerto
as we two become as one

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

1 posted 2001-01-12 01:45 AM

Very descriptive and passionate. Great writing and use of metaphors.

KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

2 posted 2001-01-12 03:24 AM

thanks Mark. I am very appreciative of your comments.

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko

maxtec1
Senior Member

since 2000-12-09

Posts 577
Garland, Tx

3 posted 2001-01-12 04:45 AM

Very good writing. I loved the feel of passion.
Love and light,
Richard

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

4 posted 2001-01-12 07:14 AM

Fabulous, truly beautiful loved the graphic as well
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

5 posted 2001-01-12 08:02 AM

appreciative and thankful for your time to read and comment on this tanka

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

6 posted 2001-01-12 09:36 AM

Yup! I think you've got it!

Well done...

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

7 posted 2001-01-12 10:08 AM

Wow! Great imagery and use of metaphor, I really feel the passion throughout especially into the last line - well penned!

Take care,
Melissa

The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

8 posted 2001-01-12 11:53 AM

This is so pretty......very silky...

-SEA

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

9 posted 2001-01-12 11:56 AM

Fantastic, lovely, powerful, and a keeper for sure! May I? May I share with a poet loving friend? Gosh I hope, if you say it's okay that the pic will copy, too. They won't always, for me.

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

10 posted 2001-01-12 02:06 PM

yes.....yessssssss........wonderful eclipse here....love it.

((Hugs))
Charisma

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

11 posted 2001-01-12 02:11 PM

This...is wonderful!

KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

12 posted 2001-01-12 04:04 PM

Thanks to all for your overwhelming responses to this..wow I appreciate it.
VAS:
Yes please feel free to share the poem and the jpg.photo (I got it at www.webshots.com...where most of my photos come from)
http://wsphotofews.excite.com/001/60/Q3/d2/sY49695.jpg

smiles passin on one's poem is a great compliment to a writer.

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko

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