BREATHE YOU (Acrostic) amateur attempt

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Open Poetry #12

BREATHE YOU (Acrostic) amateur attempt

Amature2
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since 2001-01-08

Posts 416

0 posted 2001-01-12 12:33 PM

BREATHE YOU

By moonlight i see you
Reach out to be near you
Each time that i miss you
Anticipate holding you
Tranquility is you
High on images of you
Echoes of laughter around you

Yearning, wanting to free you
Orchids blooming around you
Undoubtedly the scent of you

[This message has been edited by Amature2 (edited 01-12-2001).]

Lady Lightning
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since 2000-12-04

Posts 422
Kentucky

1 posted 2001-01-12 01:41 AM

Very, very pretty..I liked it much...~LL~

The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

Breathe~
Member

since 2000-02-05

Posts 315
Washington...

2 posted 2001-01-12 11:01 AM

And here I was hoping I had a fan, *s*

instead I find a lovely creation....

This IS lovely Amature2

I love the time
and in between
the calm inside me
in the space
where I can breathe...

Sarah McLachlan

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

3 posted 2001-01-12 07:16 PM

this is beautiful & you did a great job with the acrostic

Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton