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Brother Sun's Welcome. . . |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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this is the first of a series that Kethry and I are working on. . . Brother Sun and Sister Moon. Sister Moon rises shining bright in heaven's sky the stars welcome her I, her Brother Sun have prepared the sky for her she takes my place now shine on Sister Moon keep watch of Earth while I sleep till I rise again ----------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
This was wonderful and I can't wait to see what she comes up with. Between the two of you this series is sure to be a hit. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sven this is sooo good! I was reluctant to post in response. But I have, and I've tried to match your metre and flow, however it's not nearly as well written as yours is. Write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
When I read Kethrys and saw that you were writing together I knew I was going to be thrilled with this...keep it up you two...beautiful |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sven love, what can I say except that this is awesome. It truly is, and my how wonderful this is. Fomidable m'sieur, c'est tres tres bon, As always, when English fails French fills the gaps.  Really beautiful love it truly is. I'm now scampering off in the seach for Kethry's bon mot. Take care love Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
((sigh)) Just adorable Sven as was Kethry's...write on tender one's  winged ~HUGS~ to both Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ I like the sun Adore the moon Can't wait to hear more Of this celestial tune ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Favored topics....library material....how much fun to see talented poets collaborate! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Mark, I think that we can make this series a hit!! Thanks. . . Kethry, please!! yours was every bit as good as mine. . .and you matched it perfectly!!! Thank you my friend. . . Paula, thank you. . . glad that we could come through for you!! Marsha. . . merci Madame. . . indeed when English fails, Francais will always be there. . . thanks again love. . .tracie. . .thanks for the hugs my friend. . . Marge, from Sun and from Moon. . . thank you. . . Sunshine, I knew that you would love this!!! Thank you my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love these fabulous series from the moon and the sun....and hey I love the form too, one of my favorites.looking forward... (((hugs))) Charisma |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sven, I can't wait to see a collaboration between you two. I'll be anxiously waiting! Much love, Elise |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sven, we've had the warm-up but I promised a true collaboration. You know... you write, I write I've got an interesting title if you're up for the challenge!  BTW I love your darkness poems. write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Read Kethry's first, I'm sorry to say, but only because it should be read following yours. Well done by you both. jwesley |
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