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Love Is Blind Senryu
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Love Is Blind Senryu |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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 ~LOVE IS BLIND SENRYU~ 5-7-5 Love captures the heart soul now lost in reverie eyes open, yet blind *By Melissa Honeybee* The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ Yes ! Yes ! Yes ! This is WONDERFUL ! *Hugs*, gal ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
eyes open yet blind indeed my friend. . . wonderful. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Marge - And many ~hugs~ right back at ya! Thank you so much for teaching me how to use graphics and change styles and fonts - you're a great teacher! I'm glad that you took the time out to read my senryu Sven - Yes indeed!!!!  It's a simple senryu, but sadly true in some casesTake care, Melissa< !signature--> The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 01-11-2001).] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
well said...love this wonderful senryu. excellent Charisma |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Beautiful senryu, Melissa. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
True words, Melissa...can we use this for the newsletter? |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Melissa~ i have missed your work! this is simply beautiful my friend...full of the love & inspiration i have come to admire about your poetry. take care and keep writing amy |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Melissa~ Perfect, wonderfully said ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
wonderful. I enjoyed your haiku at Starlite as well! Aloha.... Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Charisma - Thank you! Your haikus and senryus are well said too Lone Wolf - Thank you, love is always beautiful! Elizabeth - Yes, indeed 'tis true. And what a high compliment it is to ask if this can be used for the newsletter. The answer is YES! Thank you so much!  Amy - I'm glad that this inspired you, thanks for reading! Tracie66- Thank you! Koko - I'm so glad that you enjoy my haikus/senryus (check your email) The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i believe your last line will stay with me for a while...wonderfully expressed..."eyes open, yet blind"...i wish i have thought of that myself...LOL  welcome back!its good to read you again |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Superb! Yes, eyes wide open, yet they do not see. I didn't see the Tom Cruise movie, didn't want to, but the title: "Eyes Wide Shut" certainly fits how well love can see sometimes. Of course, there are different kinds of love, some sees quite well. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Kaile-Thanks for the welcome Glad you enjoyed it.Vas-Thank you, glad you could relate. And I didn't see that movie either Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Missy--Nicely penned. I like! Poeminister |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Poeminister-I'm so glad that you liked it Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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