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Rex Allen McCoy
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0 posted 2001-01-11 07:55 PM



True Love Never Dies
© by Rex Allen McCoy
~~~
Those days have faded
but not from sight
those days of beauty my thoughts unfold
When dreams of life from morn till night
were love sweet love
so true and bold
~
New days have brought
the bloom of rose
through a milder calmer sea
But nothing's half as sweet to hold
as loves young dream
of you with me
~
Your hallowed form
embedded deep
my hands
still feel your trace
Your touch
still haunts my every thought
your essence
thrills my taste
~
When morning breaks your lingered dream
and daylight dawns upon your face
I smile
then snuggle close to you
my hand slides gently
round your waist
~~~


© Copyright 2001 Rex Allen McCoy - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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1 posted 2001-01-11 08:23 PM


Rex~ this is gorgeous!!!  *SIGH*


"But nothing's half as sweet to hold
as loves young dream
of you with me"

Beautiful   -SEA

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2 posted 2001-01-11 08:34 PM


You romantic!!! I'm going to ask if we can put this in the Newsletter? Please!!!?????
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3 posted 2001-01-12 06:22 AM


Big heavy sigh ... just beautiful Rex! You've painted such a warm, loving and tender portrait of a deep and lasting love in this piece ... it's just lovely. Great choice for the newsletter Sharon!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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4 posted 2001-01-12 06:31 AM


Rex~
I think your right  
This is truly a devine piece of poetry, truly a beautiful read and my fav...the last stanza

When morning breaks your lingered dream
and daylight dawns upon your face
I smile
then snuggle close to you
my hand slides gently
round your waist

~HUGS~
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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5 posted 2001-01-12 08:43 AM


Rex, you'd best say "Yes" to Sharon....or I'll have to come have a chat with you...

this is wonderful!

Rex Allen McCoy
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6 posted 2001-01-12 05:04 PM


Thankyou SEA ... very kind of you to say that
Glad you enjoyed it
  
Thanks Sharon ... I guess I am a bit of a romantic. I feel that ladies are equals too, but I still like to pamper them, hold doors, carry things, and tell them how good they look.
And yes, thankyou, you may use the poem in the newsletter, I'm honoured
  
Thankyou Kit ... I wrote this to my wife of 20 years and it pretty much sums up how we feel about each other
  
Thanks for the hugs Tracie ... you always brighten my day
  
Ok Karilea ... you can let go of my ear now
LOL ... thankyou
  


[This message has been edited by Rex Allen McCoy (edited 01-12-2001).]

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7 posted 2001-01-12 05:22 PM


True love never dies...and that is so true.
love this romantic penned piece.

excellent penned.

Charisma

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8 posted 2001-01-12 05:33 PM


When dreams of life from morn till night
were love sweet love
so true and bold
_____________________________________________
REX, loved the poem it's such a sweet write...
Yup yup, the romantic side in you shines in this one...
Thank you for the delightful read
~*coco*~

Rex Allen McCoy
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9 posted 2001-01-12 09:20 PM


Charisma ... thankyou for the kind reply
I'm glad you liked it

Coco ... thankyou so much ... I appreciate your kindness

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10 posted 2001-01-12 09:20 PM


Ahhhh....you are a sweetie, Rex! This is lovely!

Denise

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11 posted 2001-01-12 09:22 PM


Now what I really want to know is...how did you know that is exactly what I would have reached for...because you are SO right....

LOL...

and you submitted, right?

Rex Allen McCoy
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12 posted 2001-01-12 09:22 PM


Denise ... you snuck up on me ... and that reply deserves a hug
Thankyou

Rex Allen McCoy
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13 posted 2001-01-12 09:28 PM


You ladies are sneaking up on me tonight... now I just took a wild guess and followed the throbbing sensation I got in my ear as I read your post

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14 posted 2001-01-12 09:37 PM


What a truly beautiful poem this is! And I'm so glad you used the word 'snuggle'...coz that to me conveys utter contentment! A fantastic word in an amazing poem, by a very talented poet. Wonderful!  
~Becky~

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15 posted 2001-01-12 11:11 PM


*pout* But Sharon, I was gonna ask if we could use this for the newsletter!  

Anyway Rex, beautiful poem! Well done!

Rex Allen McCoy
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16 posted 2001-01-13 10:05 AM


Thankyou Becky ... I like the word snuggle as well it's warm loving and inviting

Elizabeth ... thankyou sweet lady

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17 posted 2001-01-13 04:11 PM


Rex Allen--You are right...and have shown it so well in this tender poem...love never dies.
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18 posted 2001-01-13 10:00 PM


Rex, this is wonderful  
Sandra

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19 posted 2001-01-14 02:09 AM


What a lovely poem.I liked it much....    ~LL~

The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

Rex Allen McCoy
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20 posted 2001-01-15 07:28 PM


Martie ... thankyou very much ... always glad to see your name

Sandra ... I'm glad you enjoyed

~LL~ ... Thanks for your kind words

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