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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-01-11 07:31 PM

Whispers

whispers
word    kisses
melt   my   heart
soft   lowered    heavy    breath
send    tingles    through    my    body
come    closer    now
give    me
whispers

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-01-11 07:34 PM

yep.........gotta love those whispers

wonderful write

-SEA

Amature2
Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 416

2 posted 2001-01-11 08:38 PM

1 whisper says alot, nice words slick lady. Amature2

DonFurr
Member

since 2001-01-01

Posts 172
Monticello IN

3 posted 2001-01-11 08:54 PM

Your words stir more than just the imagination.
They fire the heart and soul to an inferno.

maxtec1
Senior Member

since 2000-12-09

Posts 577
Garland, Tx

4 posted 2001-01-11 08:58 PM

WOW I really liked this one. It has such a warm feeling about it.
Love and light.
Richard

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

5 posted 2001-01-11 10:14 PM

shhhh can almost hear your breath.
Nice write
Rich

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

6 posted 2001-02-04 07:36 PM

This was such a delight to read and how you presented your poem on screen just complimented the poem in every sense...
~coco~

You get a lot more lesson mileage when you lose in some situations than always win...

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

7 posted 2001-02-04 10:47 PM

Love this little whisper of yours, slick.

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

8 posted 2001-02-04 11:06 PM

Very clever with an effective presentation, I really enjoyed this~

Take care,
Melissa~

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

9 posted 2001-02-04 11:09 PM

I like this and the shape of it. Nicely done.

Poeminister

"...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls-
O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
-Poe

[This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 02-04-2001).]

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

10 posted 2001-02-07 02:44 AM

ty all.......i love to get whispers....dont you? helen

Robert Joseph
Member

since 2000-10-07

Posts 491
South Carolina

11 posted 2001-02-07 09:18 AM

Helen, soft and caressing...lovely work.

Robert Joseph

Agent696_DS
Junior Member

since 2001-01-31

Posts 33
NY, USA

12 posted 2001-02-07 09:52 AM

Nice work Speak softly.... I Like it alot

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