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Let The Rain Come...........
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Let The Rain Come........... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Let the rain come Come wash my cares away Away to a place, I never have to be Be quick rain, I need your peace Peace of mind, quieting of sounds Sounds that echo through my heart like memories Memories that burn deep until you fall Fall upon me…….freeing me from remembering Remembering the promises, the whispers, the lies Lies that I knew were unreal, untrue and still believed Believed in you, believed in love Love only happens now Now when the rain comes. ~SEA~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe love, this is wonderful it truly really is. Utterly lovely, and I can hear the rain Take care love Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
SEA...this is wonderful! |
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mark woolard Member
since 2001-01-02
Posts 143 |
if this brand of rain fell from the clouds i would walk everywhere with my mouth open! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mushy~ thank you......it's right outside  Sunshine~  thank youMark W~ it's a state of mind....... -SEA |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
FABULOUS!!!!!!!! "Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
SEA, A Lovely write. Enjoyed the read. Poeminister |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Wonderfully metaphorical piece. I was reminded of Listen To The Music Of The Falling Rain ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
SEA...it rains in Florida a lot!! I love the concept.....forever may you reign! |
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Beckalini Member
since 2001-01-02
Posts 151Yorkshire, England |
SEA, one word....WOW! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Irish Rose~ Thank you PM~ You are most kind, thank you Marge~ I happen to love that song.......Balladeer~ yes, but would you dance with me in the rain? Beckalini~ one back to ya.......Thanks! -SEA |
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Tammy16 Junior Member
since 2000-11-26
Posts 21 |
SEA - I have been reading a lot of yours over the past several weeks.....this one is lovely. T |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Tammy~ Thank you I'm glad you decided to say hello......I'm looking forward to reading more of your poetry -SEA |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
SEA, you've captured my heart in this one sweetie and I so much enjoyed reading this poem ya know it inspired me with a verse though not the same of quality as your's, I wish to share my thoughts with you... As always SEA, smiles and hugs and a big thank you... And gently as the raindrops fall Fall beneath these lips of bliss Bliss of once upon a time Time when love was pure and kind Kind to heart of tenderness Tenderness of rememberance mist Mist of words echoed from before Before the drops of rain had poured *~coco~* [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 01-12-2001).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Beautiful sentiments and freedom captured in this one my friend. Isn't it nice to be inspired by such a wonderful blessing of nature? |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sea...its amazing how the rain can cleanse away sadness isnt it? This is lovely sweetie |
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