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Cocktails for Sweethearts
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Cocktails for Sweethearts |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
*~Cocktails for Sweethearts*~ Through mist of night she strolls through life In search of a mind whose soul takes flight Within the walls of nightclub hues Bartender Al gives ear to her tune With a grand marnier chilled in glass of old She remembers of times not so long ago And whispers to her friend attending at bar This world and its pace has gone too far ...Where is the decency and kind embrace Within the heart of a love's true face This chill of breeze amid midnight air From sweethearts fluttering everywhere... Casting eyes through room with stare Engaging thoughts of those who dare Seeking not a love to find Purely just a challenge of minds All the while sweethearts nod hello As bartender Al leans into her form A gentle hand he does comfort her With compliments another drink he passes over While jukebox beats a rhythm of blues Cocktails for sweethearts are just but a few *~coco~*  |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Looks like we posted on the same subject. Yours is much better than mine though. I enjoyed the read. Love and light, Richard |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Wow Coco........this is fabulous! The picture your words portray is perfect with the picture you used to compliment your poem........made to go together........  -SEA |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
what a great match!! I'm thirsty!!! "Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Coco...Wonderful! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Quality in poetry...James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dani~ You drew the picture my mind was visualizing with your words. Then you capped it off with just the right graphic ! That's Two-For-Two Cocktails are on you ! *winks* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Coco--Wonderful write. Enjoyed the read. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Grand Marnier?? Wonderful PoetFriend Coco. . . I have the glasses. . .  Excellent my friend. . . ---------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
cocktails...love them, and enjoyed your lovely poem and graphic. well done Coco ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
If only the modesty would return a little then maybe the impact of love would once again find a home. Lovely verse my friend and you have captured the feelings well in your words accompanied by the perfect graphic. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautifully written Coco ... the imagery within your words brought this scene perfectly to life, wonderful! Best wishes, /Kit |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I ec-cho SEA 100% CoCo...excellent piece and the image you used couldn't be more fitting. jwesley |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Thank you PoetFriends for stopping by to read this lil rhyme and I appreciate very much your taking the time to comment in replies... Hugs2U *~coco~* |
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