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0 posted 2001-01-11 09:24 AM



~He said I smell like wildflowers
fresh after a storm
screaming with scent
as he gathered me close
held me so sweet
~Told me when he thinks of me
he see's the ocean............
feels the tug and pull
~Swears the gods took the sun
and wove it through my hair
to sparkle and shine, just for him
~And when he kisses me...........
he claims my lips are as soft
as clouds.......full and pouty with rain


~SEA~

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1 posted 2001-01-11 09:26 AM


IWIHWT....so it's a Keeper.....

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2 posted 2001-01-11 11:04 AM


Thank you Sunshine   I'm happy you liked this   -SEA
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3 posted 2001-01-11 11:09 AM


Oh please don't let him get away. Any man who can compare you to flowers the sea and sky is a treasure himself. Beautiful!!!!!!!
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4 posted 2001-01-11 11:13 AM


I love this Sea..Sooo pretty
One of my favorites.

              ~V~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



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5 posted 2001-01-11 12:06 PM


inot2B~  don't worry, I wont let my husband get away, thank you  

Victoria~   thank you  

-SEA

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6 posted 2001-01-11 01:31 PM


Awww..This is just like you to make us smile with such a sweet poem..I haven't been here in forever it seems..Got lots of catching up to do...So today I start with you and and it was a good start.. I loved this one..  Hugs  ~LL~

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7 posted 2001-01-11 03:04 PM


oh Sea....wonderful....wonderful penned...and mmm....wish that I smell that way right now, but I only smell after the flu ..but as you see, can't stay away.
but well tomorrow is another day...hope to reply on the others than.

Take care

((hugs))
Charisma

ooopsss.... have I allready told you that I love  this wonderful piece...excellent as always my friend

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8 posted 2001-01-11 03:09 PM


OUCH.   the revisitation of the depth of kiss i had once forgotten.
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9 posted 2001-01-11 03:10 PM


MARRY THIS GUY!!!   If you haven't already  

"Every man dies.
Not every man truly lives."
Braveheart

Kathleen


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10 posted 2001-01-11 05:45 PM


LL~ glad you're back   thanks I'm happy I could give you a smile  

Charisma~ I hope you feel better soon, and no one smells good with the flu  

Mark W.~ ouch? is that good or bad?  

Irish Rose~ I am married to him   ain't life grand?!  

-SEA

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11 posted 2009-08-10 02:49 AM


This is so sweet and sensual, SEA.

A

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