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Open Poetry #12

Drops become me

Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2001-01-11 04:19 AM

Condensed between Sun and Earth
a single drop falls in time
to be collected like others
of dreams wished upon this land.
Joining the rest in a fenzy of life
one drop to another, given time
to speak of a seconds memory
when combined bring joy.
Never to late, the river turns
to a better dressed day
of lavender hills in farm scapes
let heavens kiss this ground.
The drops are my memories
that together stand alone
my hearts passion comes to me
drifting my way back home.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2001-01-11 08:02 AM

Michael G
"the drops are my memories that together stand alone."
I liked this bit. In fact I liked the whole poem.
Write on
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

dragonpoe
Senior Member

since 2000-11-12

Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida

2 posted 2001-01-11 08:28 AM

A very well versed piece. Enjoyed it all the way through. Wonderful title, too.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2001-01-11 03:25 PM

I have to agree, this is very well written

-SEA

mark woolard
Member

since 2001-01-02

Posts 143

4 posted 2001-01-11 03:36 PM

Image: a single rain drop frozen in the frame of your perception.

this, like a memory, can often give direction.

well written, man.

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2001-01-11 03:41 PM

wonderful concept, dreams mingling like raindrops....what a wonderful promise of fulfillment this brings...

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