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Artistic
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since 2000-08-09
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0 posted 2001-01-11 01:32 AM


Silence.
Not a sound is heard.
Even as lips move,
Nothing comes to me.

I can only feel,
Not hear.

I can only see,
Not hear.

Silent world,
With no sounds,
And I revel in it.
Of silenceā€¦

It echoes loudly.


"Dreams are the touchstones of our characters"
-Henry David Thoreau



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SEA
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1 posted 2001-01-11 01:35 AM


I can only immagine.......and wonder.......fantastic write!   -SEA
spiked
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2 posted 2001-01-11 01:41 AM


can hear the quiet gives me chills. you've made it come to life
Rich

DonFurr
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since 2001-01-01
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3 posted 2001-01-11 01:48 AM


Your silence speaks loudly to the quite places within us all.

Well spoken and adored are these words.
Thank you for sharing a beautiful thought.



Artistic
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Colorado/Rochester, NY
4 posted 2001-01-11 05:12 PM


Sea-- Rich-- Donfurr--  Thank you all.  Glad you enjoyed my poem.  Just to let you and future readers know that I am deaf, thus, the topic of silence.  

Thank you!

--Artistic--

"Dreams are the touchstones of our characters"
-Henry David Thoreau



Lady Ollyne
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since 2001-01-08
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5 posted 2001-01-11 05:58 PM


When all is not heard, but instead felt, the intensity of every vibration within, releases in silent thought, what one cannot hear.

Thy words achieve thy goal...this lady hears everything The Artistic One shares...

Lady Ollyne



"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare

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