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spiked
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0 posted 2001-01-11 12:50 PM




Crippling the sounds I hear
The echoes of a driving fear
That love is more a fantasy
To counter our reality
Of sounds that ring so full of pain
Screams of silence in the rain
Heard by all yet known by none
Hearts in retreat left on the run

We gamble with this life we lead
In search of things we think we need
To pass beyond this string of doubt
Hear my scream, let out a shout
That I refuse to feel no love
Succumbing to this lifeless dove
Where dreams and hope fade to the back
Makes us aware of all we lack
With all my strength I’ll shine right through
Exposing all I know is true
Compassion,pride and dignity
Only part of all that’s me
Yet I am just re-born. 









[This message has been edited by spiked (edited 01-11-2001).]

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SEA
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1 posted 2001-01-11 12:54 PM


Rich~ I love this............

"We gamble
with this life we lead
In search of things we think we need"

too true.......

great write!   -SEA

spiked
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2 posted 2001-01-11 12:57 PM


Thank you Sea your fast caught me while I was still editing lol.
Appreciate your thoughts.
Rich

serenity blaze
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3 posted 2001-01-11 01:02 AM


I will save this one...need to feel that...um...absolute...admire your strength.
Lady Lightning
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4 posted 2001-01-11 01:05 AM


With all my strength I’ll shine right through
Exposing all I know is true
Compassion,pride and dignity
Only part of all that’s me
Yet I am just re-born.

Rich....This is really great work..You say so much ...Thoughts I could've penned myself if I had thought of em' first... I really liked this lots!!  ~LL~


The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

Lady Lightning
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5 posted 2001-01-11 01:06 AM


Oops,,forgot to hit me save button!!!  ~LL~

The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

Paula Finn
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6 posted 2001-01-11 02:03 AM


You ARE shining with this one Rich...this is just great

Life's a game...but who says you have to follow the rules?



tracie66
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7 posted 2001-01-11 03:31 AM


Rich~
Such beautiful wise words...great write
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



spiked
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8 posted 2001-01-11 10:20 PM


Thank you serenity, LL, Paula and Tracie sometimes things aren't always as strong and easy as they appear. Much work in feeling this way.
Thanks
Rich

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