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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-01-11 12:10 PM


Acrostic Calendar Of Thoughts
~*Marge Tindal~*


Just a little case oF
Anxiety of this versE
Now I cannot tell A fiB
Unless this becomes youR
Arrangement for a SenyrU
Raising the ante,I say,AhA
Yearning to finish this yeaR
.....................seeMinglY
........................Arriving
.....at a conclusion, foRegone
........................Coming in
........................Heralding
A new song sung on
Precious spring voices
Rumbling with the
Images of Spring's
Laughter.............Merrily
.....................Alluding to
.....................Yearnings of
Joy
Unearthed in
Naked abandon of
Erstwhile pursuits of Jubilant
......................Undertakings
......................Laying
.................merelY
Amongst the
Unique flowerbeds of
Granted wishes
Undeniably
Seeking a special
Touch from handS
...............Epitomizing the
...............Pampering of
...............The
...............Embryo of thought
...............Maturing in the
...............Blending of minds
...............Equalizing the
...............Rationality
Of
Concientious
Thoughts
Orbiting the
Boundries of
Eternity and
Returning to Nest in
.............Ordinary
.............Vagueness of questioned
.............Epistles
.............Marking the vestiges of
.............Belief in
.............Eternal life and
.............Ruminating with
Dedications of
Ethereal
Considerations
Emanating from
Manifestations
Borne on the light of
Eternal truths of the
Return of the Messiah


*From the Poetry Workshop Forum



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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1 posted 2001-01-11 12:41 PM


Marvelous
aglow
rare
grace
excellent!!!

Poeminister

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Now I am just gonna go nuts trying to figure out how to do these.......I'll be up all night!!!   Marge, this is AWESOME! I really want to learn how to do this, I will be trying this out! Very neat style!   -SEA
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3 posted 2001-01-11 01:01 AM


My stars what an endeavor and successully won, mastered, woven.  Fully enjoyed this. Amazing!
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4 posted 2001-01-11 01:10 AM


NICE!!  I like the format!!  I think it's very creative!!  I just can't help but think that format would take forever to figure out unless that was a flash of pure inspiration!  Way cool!  

--Artistic--

"Dreams are the touchstones of our characters"
-Henry David Thoreau



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5 posted 2001-01-11 01:46 AM


Beautifully Creative Marge.
Nice work
Rich

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6 posted 2001-01-11 02:43 AM


and that's talent for ya  
Margie wonderful acrostic, I'm so jealous cause I love em and I aint that good....good on ya hon, superb piece
~HUGS~
Tracie~


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It is the harmony of the universe



Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2001-01-11 02:57 AM


PoeMinister~
I so appreciate your talented reply.

SEA~
Thanks, hon.
The thoughts came quickly and surprisingly coherent ...
The finishing touches challenged me ...
I enjoyed doing this one very much.
Give it a go, sweet poet.

VAS~
My goodness - I do thank you so much.

Artistic~
It was a combination punch of inspiration and manueverability.
I'm so pleased you enjoyed it.

Spiked~
I appreciate your thoughts.
Thank you.

Tracie~
Oh, but you will ...
Let those thoughts flow, sweetie.
~*Marge*~


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8 posted 2001-01-11 06:44 AM


Margie girl, this is as fabulous as anything I've ever seen. The way you've written this is superb, and you obviously have talent in abundance. Excellant piece love, truly outstanding. And no I don't think I'll try it, it looks far too hard for me. (Yes why won't people believe me when I say I'm terminally lazy. To stretch is one thing to work dear heart quite another.   )
Take care kid
                  Mushy
                      


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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9 posted 2001-01-11 07:10 AM


Marge, I am speechless! This is absolute exquisite perfection! Love, Ellie

Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart.

Joseph Fort Newton



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10 posted 2001-01-11 02:51 PM


Marsha~
*Hugs* and thanks.
Bet you could try at least ONE ! !

Ellie~
Thanks so very much, my friend.
~*Marge*~


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11 posted 2001-01-11 02:58 PM


Marge....*WOW*.what a marvelous Calendar...love your acrostic creativity and thoughts.

thanks for sharing
excellent as always my friend

(((hugs)))
Charisma

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12 posted 2001-01-11 07:36 PM


Wow! Amazing you could do this!
I will have to print this one for sure.
You are one creative lady!
Hugs,
Deb

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13 posted 2001-01-11 08:05 PM


Amazing, no matter how you spell it!!
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14 posted 2001-01-11 08:08 PM


Marge, you have way too much time on your hands!!! WOW! Things I wouldn't even attempt you make look simple! * bowing *
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15 posted 2001-01-11 08:37 PM


Charisma~
So glad to share with you.
I think the diagnosis back from the lab is
acrostically-challenged !  LOL !

BloomingRose~
Thank you.
It really was a fun piece to do.

PoetdeVine~
Even gnizama ???
LOL !  Thank you.

Balladeer~
Too much time on my hands ?
Nah ... just checked my calendar -
only got twelve months !  

It really wasn't that difficult to write -
and the only 'real work' was in the formatting.

You should see the one I'm doing with FIREMEN models !  LOL !
Maybe next year !

*Thanks to all of you for enjoying this.
~*Marge*~



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16 posted 2001-01-12 01:30 AM


So you took the acrostic 501 class and moved to the front.  Wonderfully done my friend and I don't care what you say.........THIS WASN'T EASY AT ALL.  I would say that with this effort you should at least get a scholarship to go with your grade.  Totally awesome and of course........."Margeificant"
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17 posted 2001-01-12 10:42 AM


WOW!!!!

*Sighs* This is so well penned, you make it look so easy and yet I know that it is quite the feat.  You should be very proud of this double yearly acrostic!

APPLAUSE FOR MARGE!

Take care,
Melissa


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18 posted 2001-01-12 08:49 PM


Wow, Marge, very creative!!

Denise

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19 posted 2001-01-12 09:01 PM


MarkB~
Thank you, love.
WAS TOO !
*wink*

Melissa~
Thanks, sweetie.
LOVE your new colors !

Denise~
Thank you.
AND just where have you been ?
I've missed you and was concerned.
Answer your e-mail !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~



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20 posted 2001-01-12 09:46 PM


Ahhhh, sorry to have worried you, Marge, I was sick again and not on the 'puter...I can't access my DirectWeb or my Juno email
(they restricted me to 4 a.m. because of my heavy use...can you believe it?) So,I have yet another ISP....AT&T Worldnet....I'm very happy with them! My new email address is...*drum roll*  snyder.denise@worldnet.att.net  Keep those cards and letters coming!!  

Denise

[This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 01-12-2001).]

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21 posted 2001-02-08 02:48 PM


Marge, I'm surprised I didn't catch this one in open forum before...
My DearPoetFriend your talent shines in this acrostic calendar...
This is brilliant writing and my compliments to you...
So back up2top this one goes... it's AWESOME!
~coco

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22 posted 2001-02-08 07:16 PM


Denise~
Tee-Hee on the *drum-roll* ...
I'm just glad you're all better !

CocoBaci~
Well ... I voted for that name so I'll use it
cause I LOVE IT !
Thanks for your carousing of the back pages.
You're a doll !
~*Marge*~



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23 posted 2001-02-08 10:41 PM


This is SO CLEVER...you continue to amaze so gracefully Marge!
Marge Tindal
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24 posted 2001-02-09 02:03 AM


Serenity~
Thanks, gal.
It really was bushels of fun to do !
Didn't even need a Tylenol !
Did ya' ever do that Paradellie-Doo-Doo ?
LOL !  I didn't think so !
You're so fun !
~*Marge*~




~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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25 posted 2001-02-09 04:43 PM


I think you need to get out of the office for awhile... But what do I know... I dream of dragging and droping all night long... I wake to find nothing has ever changed and all my notes are gone and can't be found. Is this a new syndrome of some kind... Is there a cure..? How much does it cost..? Am I covered..? Will I get well..? Is this a good time for, LOL

Much love, dale
.

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26 posted 2001-02-09 04:47 PM


oops

[This message has been edited by lucky (edited 02-09-2001).]

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27 posted 2001-02-09 07:08 PM


Lucky, my friend~
I agree with you.
Glad to get the chance to convene with nature and hug humanity.
Reaching out - touching ...
You know I'm thinking of you ... and my prayers surround you.
Love~
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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