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Day Long Hands |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Day Long Hands long and hard came the reflections in-between the up and down of the day soft and smooth should have been the flow of loving thoughts but short and swift were the moments interludes of time breathless left her breathless they came too fast left too quick myriad thoughts and pain pain hurts absent from body but renders the mind useless never seen but words touched then the heart broke pain hurts what does care look like feel like? I would put a stamp on care and send it direct bypassing hands straight to your heart if it would take the pain away from you if I could I would… long and hard this day has been long and hard and difficult of dream distant on the wind of keen I heard long the scream of scoria ~ suffering ~ seeking out the next victim and I went to see, to hear, to hold, to quietly listen, and all that could be offered was a helping hand 01.10.01 Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Heart-rendered brilliance. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
 To give a helping hand to the hurting is a wonderful testimony of your caring character... Bob <>< |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
...........and holding out that hand when it is needed is the greatest gift you could give........... gentle write from your sweet pen  -SEA |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Karilea....This is so good...I loved it, I did... ~LL~The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sunshiny girl~ What a beautiful heartfelt piece, soft render of your heart sweet one...well penned ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
And by sending a golden weave this way today you have helped...never doubt the power of your pen Karilea...never, this is beautiful and so full of your heart that one can't help but see your soul shining in each and every line of this gentle weave...so tender and so loving~ Swim in the waves of the weave...Not the mind of the weaver~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, I could say something glib and flip like, oh kid I've got to hand it too you, or give you a big hand. But I won't because this is sheer brilliance. As always dear heart this is superb, perfect in line, form and style. (See I said I'd learnt C A, didn't I?) Anyway kid I told you before I have absolutely fabulous taste, and I know beauty, and this is. Wonderful work love Take care Majestic Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marge...thank you... Bob...these words would fit many a soul here...including you...thank you... SEA...you are the gentle one...thank you for reading... LL ~ I am SO very glad you did...thank you... tracie66...you give SUCH good hugs...thank you... Holly...you are a little princess, you know that?...and you have wings, too... Oh Heck Marsha...flip Flipper, flip away...just don't flip out... I need you!... Hugs...and thanks!... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This read like a trickle into a stream and then a river and the sea, I loved it all the way through. "Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Irish...exactly! Thank you! I'm glad you got carried away with it... |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--Fabulous, heart touched poetry!!!!! |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
What does care look like? Wouldn't surprise me at all if it looked just like the sun.... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Martie...thank you... 'Deer..."care"...I could guess...I think my Mom named me for part of it...but hey...I'm only guessing...and I can't ask... |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sometime thats all thats needed...a hand held out in love...beautiful dearlin |
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