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HM3
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0 posted 2001-01-10 11:34 PM


With every breath of rain
I choke on the laughter
My heart sees in you

No walls
< !signature-->

Work like money doesn't matter, love like you've never been hurt, dance like nobody's watching...






[This message has been edited by HM3 (edited 01-11-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Mark Ozee - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-01-11 12:52 PM


HM3~
Long time - no see.
WELCOME BACK !

This is a tight little write.
I like that.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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with you
2 posted 2001-01-11 01:19 AM


I liked....... -SEA
dgvarner
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3 posted 2001-01-11 01:23 AM


deep stuff.... i like  

hugs, g

"oh baby baby, its a wild world..its hard to get by just upon a smile..." cat stevens

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4 posted 2001-01-11 01:58 AM


Short and Rich with feeling.
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5 posted 2001-02-06 08:12 PM


Joy, perfectly expressed.  I liked this alot.
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6 posted 2001-02-06 08:48 PM


HM3,
   So much said with so few words.  Wonderful!
          Elise

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