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Sunshine
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0 posted 2001-01-10 10:14 PM


Visions

Visions come to me in dreaming
dreaming whiles the time away
away on horses I shall ride far
far into the cloudy heights
heights which take me to my loving
loving man of mine
mine so warm, tender, handsome
handsome being a state of mind.
Mind now you, this way of dreaming,
dreaming could be your escape
escape to 'what' you may ask;
ask away, come what may
may your dreams always
be visions.

©KRJ
9 September 1999


© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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1 posted 2001-01-10 10:18 PM


Quickly she adds this to her library......woosh! LOVE this! Glad you put it up in #12 for us to enjoy!!!   -SEA
Poeminister
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2 posted 2001-01-10 10:23 PM


Sunshine -I like the way you've written this, it goes into my library as well.  Beautifully done.

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3 posted 2001-01-10 10:23 PM


Certainly glad you reposted this...for me, wonderful work!

jwesley

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4 posted 2001-01-11 06:36 AM


Kari love, this is utterly amazing, yet more, Kari please love, how am I supposed to learn if you keep me on a short supply. I love this I don't know if there's any way I can do this, but I'll have a try. (I promise I'll try, okay kid   and don't pout dear heart, it doesn't suit you.) I can't say that I'll get this right, and if it isn't love don't blame me.

This is such an example of what I was saying, you have such a brilliant talent love. Which is why you are pure sunshine, and I'm ........ not  
Take care love
                Majestic Marsha
                        
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Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
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[This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 01-11-2001).]

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5 posted 2001-01-11 09:06 AM


SEA...can you hear my thanks whoosh by...? {~,^}...

Poeminister...watch that library shelf...it can get full rather quickly...[as she smiles...] thank you!...{~,^}

Certainly James...who else? {~,^} Thank you!...

Marsha...this was a challenge way back when....and yes, you TOO can do it...I have this feeling in my old bones....now, just remember, the key is....ready?  HAVE FUN WITH IT!....HUGS....K

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6 posted 2001-01-12 01:59 AM


Kari,
I absolutely love this! Now I've seen yours and Marsha's I'm tempted to give it a try. Could be interesting!
write on
Kethry.


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.


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7 posted 2001-01-12 08:32 AM


Do it Kethry...just remember that the very last word should be the very first word...

have fun!

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