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Raindrops Beating (Acrostic) |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Raging inside me Amazing power waiting Impatiently, to be free Near the heart, coming from my soul Dare not Restrain these feelings, so Obsene with need, desire Passion unyielding Surrendering to nothing or to no one Before you.............. Exactly As I've always wished for ~ wanted Taking all..............giving more Inspiration pure Need released Gently Instictively knowing Not to stop........... Touching fire Igniting an inferno More delicious than Ever known before Whispers fall in the night Instigating Thoughts Heavy with emotion Melting together Your heart and mine Healing me Effortlessly As each Raindrop Falls in perfect Tune with the rhythm of my heart. ~SEA~ [This message has been edited by SEA (edited 01-10-2001).] |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
SEA--I like this muchly. Filled with much passion. Lovely acrostic. Poeminister |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
WOW! This is quite the flame you have burning here! I started to sweat just reading it and each drip turned to steam!!  |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
SEA, This is splendid, and very warm, should I say sizzling. Very beautifully done with a graceful poet's style. "Whispers fall in the night Instigating Thoughts Heavy with emotion Melting together Your heart and mine Healing me Effortlessly As each Raindrop Falls in perfect Tune with the rhythm of my heart. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Nice - nice - nice ! Glad to see you made it to the Workshop class, too.  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Evening SEA, A very nice photo SEA, and a very well written poem. I wasn't going to come on tonight, but now I'm glad that I did, to read writings like this. BC |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Raindrops beating in time with your heart ... that should top the charts I'd say  |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
PM~ thank you so much! Insect~  thank youDJD~ glad you liked thanks Marge~ I figured since I was so late to class I better try for a good grade  Thanks BC~ thank you and, thank you, glad you were here tonight Rex~ thank you for that! -SEA |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You knew I'd read this, and then put it in my library, didn't you...aha! Thought so! Hugs.... |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Acrostic? Your poem flows so nicely that I did not even realize. Had to come back and look at it again. Very expressive..... Bob <>< |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine~ you are so sweet, thank you Bob~ thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed this -SEA |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe love absolutely excellant, it really is. You are really good at these, absolutely fabulous Take care kid Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I would say that you get the A+ in this one. You did a marvelous job in putting this together and the flow was wonderful all the way through as was the whole piece. I can see how Bob could forget is was an acrostic because it does not show any sign of being forced into a certain word for the beginning letters. I applaud you my friend. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful Acrostic SEA ... loved this! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Beckalini Member
since 2001-01-02
Posts 151Yorkshire, England |
First of all, what a wonderful phrase to (acrosticise?). *lol*, sorry, I dunno if you can turn it into a verb or not....but I guess I just did huh? Anyway, you chose a beautiful phrase to use, and you made a little piece of magic out of it. Wonderfully done SEA. Made me smile ~Becky~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mushy~ sweet friend, I thank you so much for always being so kind Mark~ an A+ coming from you is extermely high praise.....thank you so much Kit~ thank you Becky~ very nice of you to say so, thank you.....and I liked the way you used it as a verb! -SEA |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Have to take your word for the "acrostic" part...me I just plumb liked it even if I din't know is was one of the big "A's". Maybe I'll wise up one day...hmmm jwesley |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
SEA~ What a most delightful acrostic...so very well done ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Aww SEA...you do it to me every time...BIG smiles ....  But we knew that, huh? Hugs... ~LL~ The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
SEA, I was sure I had responded to this, Mea Culpa. I was so moved by this write my reply probably got lost in my psychobabble. I love the way you make acrostics look easy and I know they're not! I love the way you follow a theme and make it flow, and I especially love the way you show your spirit. write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
SEA, glad I found this, it's lovely "I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
Excellent...very warm and sensual..I adored this poem! Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*wow* SEA........what a marvelous write have you penned.....do I sense some heat.... love it my friend ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 WOW!!! Ooohhhhhhh...I love this, sweet friend, you always impress me with your words, this is a fabulous acrostic with a message humming straight from your heart! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is a rainstorm of poetic love! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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