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mark woolard
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0 posted 2001-01-10 05:45 PM


Autumn Jazz

See these blank lines
Feel these blank lines
Read these blank lines

Shadow our summer blues
with many hues of winter.

Tap the ivory and take my soul
(strange voice) to New York City

and beat poet jazz,
irreverent and scattered:

Abandoned leaves
falling from the trees

Now stripped of dignity.

© Copyright 2001 mark woolard - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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1 posted 2001-01-10 09:58 PM


I prefer to think of the trees as brazenly nude...... no really, Autumn is my favorite time of year......and I love Jazz. This was very nicely done   -SEA
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2 posted 2001-01-14 09:04 AM


think I'll jazz this BTTT

Sunnyone
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3 posted 2001-01-14 09:59 AM


Now you've touched upon my two favorite things!  Autumn and Jazz!!  


Write on!
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4 posted 2001-01-14 05:18 PM


I can see it now. . .

great poem!!

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tracie66
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5 posted 2001-01-15 02:29 AM


Hey there
Loved this jazzy piece  
Tracie~


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It is the harmony of the universe



Nate Dogg
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6 posted 2001-01-16 12:05 PM


Oh, I'm not a big fan of jazz but when i hear jazz mixed with hip-hop(The Roots), I get a very smooth and organic feeling....so i automatically loved this poem...beautiful work!

Nathan

mark woolard
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7 posted 2001-01-17 01:04 PM


Thanks, everyone.  Finger snaps to you all!
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