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Pools Of Green |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Pools Of Green Some days I think in pools of green Those lovely visions I have seen The ones that sink into your mind The ones that perish in the find. The ones you see inside a dream The ones you want and stay in seem The fantasy of ecstasy That disappears in agony. I think along desires path In gardens grown of aftermath. I walk the shadows with a light To peel away the dark of night. And there I find my treasure chest The pleasures sort within my breast. And fill my mind with cherish find The ones that perish in my mind. Oh God I wish that they could stay And never ever blink away. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I think along desires path In gardens grown of aftermath. I walk the shadows with a light To peel away the dark of night. And there I find my treasure chest The pleasures sort within my breast. And fill my mind with cherish find The ones that perish in my mind. Oh God I wish that they could stay And never ever blink away. ================ I feel the same way when reading poetry ... poetry like this. love walking the paths of your mind beautifully cool Stinky *  * *L*later emerald dreams gator me No one ever told me ... I could get lost while standing still ... and sorrow doesnt make a sound ... as it takes away all your will. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
For two very special green reasons, this is being libraried...{~,^} Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Karilea, I thank you for being libraried. *L* JM, Walking the paths of my mind is fine, Just be careful of the pot holes. Winkiewinkie, Stinky |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
What a delightful you painted for these eyes of green.......   Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Sy-babes ... those arent potholes ... they are pools of wisdom *winkiewinkie* |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Beautiful and unique imagery Sy, a brilliant piece! Nathan |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunny1, Thanks for the beautiful green eyes. JM, Ya about 79 proof. LOL Nate, Thanks for the comp. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I stuck my hand in pool of green And pulled out things I'd never seen! My mother gave my hair a yank And pulled me from the septic tank!!  Aw, I'm sorry, Sy. I just get overcome by demons sometimes, you know...? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Balladeer, How did you know where I found it????? |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Look like this ????  *wink* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This is beautiful |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
I like this muchly. Nicely done. Poeminister |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sy~ Lovely pools of green, great read Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sy, I think that I have never seen a poem more nice than pond of green Write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love this pools of green... ((hugs)) Charisma |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
SEYMOUR, a tender write and I much enjoyed the read... Thank you *~coco*~ |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Pools of green, reminded me of the morning glory pool in Yellowstone Nat'l Park years ago. It was a crystal clear aqua color that intensified with depth toward the center. So precious are treasured memories as your most enjoyable poem implies. Rae |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Yea, exactly like that. *L* Paula, Thanks for the beautiful. Poeminister, Thanks for the muchly nicely. Tracie66, Thanks for the great read. Kethry, Loved your comment. Charmisa, Thanks for the huggs. Coco, Thanks for the tender. A Sandgrain, I've seem similar pools in alaska. Thanks for the read and comment. |
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