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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia 
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~Moonbeams~ When the sun fades completely and the moon shows his face I marvel at his beauty I wish for all his grace ~~~ Shining there so brightly With twinkling friends to guide My moon friend smiles softly With a never ending pride ~~~ His presence in the night sky Fills me with dreamy thoughts Of love under his soft rays His moonbeams gently caught ~~~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ You KNOW I like those moonbeams ! Beautifully inspired sweet poet. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Oh TRACIE, this is an adoring write I truly love it... Such tender words weaved into rhyme and of course I knew rite away that our PoetFriend Marge would be first to bid her smiles your way  Thankyou my Friend for this sweet sweet rhyme you have shared today... coco |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Very nice! I'm glad I caught these Moonbeams of dreamy thoughts |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
What a lovely poem... The moon really is beautiful, isn't it? thanks for the read. "Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today" ~Broadway Musical RENT~ *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful visuals Tracie ... this flowed with such grace, just lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Tracie~ the Moon is so powerful.......controling........and yes, so romantic........I really liked this beautiful poem of yours! -SEA |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
I think the moon has hired some poets to do moonbeam commercials. Beautifully written! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Nothing like a moonlight stroll with the one we love Then again, there's nothing like 'anything' when it's with the one we love Now see what your poem does ... it makes people get all moonstruck |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
 Margie~ Indeed I do and it seems the moon has inspired us both lately, I've not long read your poem in #11 Moonbeams Now Dancing (beautiful) ~HUGS~ Tracie~ Coco~ Thanks sweetie and your welcome I share for your enjoyment and I'm glad you enjoyed~HUG~ Tracie~ Insect~ So glad you enjoyed ~HUG~ Tracie~ Dawn Eclipse~ Most beautiful indeed...thanks for your reply ~HUG~ Tracie~ Kit~ Always such lovely replies...thanks ~HUG~ Tracie~ SEA~ Yes all of the above and so much more...thanks for your sweet reply ~HUG~ Tracie~ inot2B~ .....LOL ~HUG~ for your reply Tracie~ ....LOL I'm moonstruck indeed Rexie thanks my friend for stopping by~HUG~ Tracie~ < !signature--> Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 01-11-2001).] |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Loving in the dark, with only moonbeams to light her lovely eye's.... that's kind of how this poem makes me think... I love it. Parker |
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Artistic Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 107Colorado/Rochester, NY |
I love to look at the moon, and you managed to catch one of the few delights of looking at the moon! Nicely done!--Artistic-- "Dreams are the touchstones of our characters" -Henry David Thoreau |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Parker~ WOW!!! my friend I'm glad I could make you feel that way, love it when my poetry has that kind of effect...thanks sweet ~HUG~ Tracie~ Artistic~ Thanks for a wonderful reply, the moon truly is a wondrous thing ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Marvelous write Tracie, Rich and Jamie (Daughter caught it first and wanted to reply so I read it also found it to be really good) |
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Beckalini Member
since 2001-01-02
Posts 151Yorkshire, England |
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful. It flows wonderfully and, being 3am, almost lulled me off to sleep. The moon is such a wonderful thing, and you captured it so well with your eloquent pen. Nighty-night ~Becky~ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Rich WOW!!! thanks thank-you as well Jamie Jamie this is for you sweetie *The winking star* When you wish Upon a star Your wish Will travel very far Through the clouds In the darkened sky Over the moon Way up high ** Past millions of stars winking with glee For a wish they long to hear and see When it reaches The brightest in the sky It hears your wish Sends a reply ** Watch it closely You will see That it winks for you So happily For wishes to grant Hopes to apply For those who reach out To the moonlit sky ** Send your hopes and wishes To the stars The most brightest star Winking by far She will catch it, bless it Send it down To float it's way gently To the ground To ride upon your back As fate No time, no place Just hope and faith ** Thanks Jamie for reading my Moonbeams and I hope all the wishes you send to the winking stars at night come true sending winged ~HUGS~ to both of you Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Becka~ How did I miss you there under the moonbeams, I'm sorry I didn't see you....thanks hon for your loevly reply ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Tracie~ some awesome imagery you got weaved into here girlie...very very good! i really enjoyed this a lot. thanks for a fantastic read as always. you make me want to go and take a glimpse now at mr moon  take care my friendamy ~A true friend is one soul in two bodies~ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Little Aimster Tonight he's Mr write (no not misspelled) I do some of my most delightful writing under his spell....thanks for a lovely reply~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
very nice poem! I don't think I ever thought of the moon as HIM ,but as Her. it is nice to see another perspective. thanks...enjoyed much! Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Koko~ Don't know why I think of him as a he, always have from a child (maybe that came about because of the story about the man in the moon) I'm not sure...well I'm glad you enjoyed ~HUG~ Tracie~< !signature--> Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 01-14-2001).] |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Tracie, Lovely poem my friend. The moon has always fascinated me with his changing phases and shapes. Sometimes when I look at him in the night sky, I realize that I am really not alone in the world. He is always there to keep me company every night. Nice writing. ~HUGS~ LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Tracie~ I think you caught a moonbeam filled with grace in this beautiful poem! ~Hugs~ Deb |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
LW~ We are never alone when we look to the sky, day or night, so glad you enjoyed my friend Tracie~ BR~ Thanks sweetie for a lovely reply, appreciate it Tracie~ Thanks to both of you for your winged ~HUGS~ floating one back to ya ~HUG~ ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
...love under soft rays of moonlight... i'm liking that picture..  wonderful painting trace! hugs,g "a love declared for days to come, is as good as none" -tracy chapman |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Lovely, you seem to have written this with moonlight itself ...very beautiful...enjoyed! Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
g~ Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed ~HUG~ Tracie~ Poeminister~ Why thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed this as well ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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