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Kethry
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0 posted 2001-01-09 11:51 PM


Beginning with....



Huh!


As

UFO tofu


Becomes

Robert "Bob" Trebor


Or

Rob a loneliness, senile, no labor


Because

Are we not drawn onward to new era


Where

He maps Spam eh!


And

Swen on gnus sung no news.





Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.


© Copyright 2001 Lynne Dale - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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1 posted 2001-01-10 11:48 AM




Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.


VAS
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2 posted 2001-01-10 11:51 AM


Unique way of doing an acrostic.  Enjoyed the read!
Marsha
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3 posted 2001-01-10 05:57 PM


Kethry love, lord does that look complicated, you have managed it wonderfully dear heart. But, and didn't you know that was coming,  this is not a challenge I can honestly say I'll give it a shot. The hardest one I tried was Kari's song one, do you remember, good grief love I had to break a sweat. Sooooo tiring dear heart, yes I am terminally lazy, I admit it.

However I don't need to because you've obviously, met and matched the challenge and since I wouldn't be able to equal it, I'll applaud instead. (I make a great audience love you know I do!)
Fabulous love absolutely fabulous.
Take care love
                    Slushy
                        


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



SEA
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with you
4 posted 2001-01-10 06:39 PM


Kethry~ I have no idea how to do this and I think I'll pass as just reading your creative work of art made my head hurt! LOL! This is neat!   -SEA
tracie66
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5 posted 2001-01-12 09:21 PM


WOW and double WOW!!!
fantastic acrostic Keth...you did it your way  

Loved it
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Rex Allen McCoy
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6 posted 2001-01-12 09:42 PM


I must admit I don't understand the whole poem, but I reallt like the way you made its form a unique stem from your style

Sunshine
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7 posted 2001-01-12 10:18 PM


Shoot...I thought I had answered this with a "Kethry...write on!" but I am mistaken, I had not done that before NOW....

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