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bbent
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0 posted 01-09-2001 08:56 PM       View Profile for bbent   Email bbent   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit bbent's Home Page   View IP for bbent


I need you to touch me…
Both inside and out…

I need you…
To lighten my burden…

The shelter you give me,
I can’t live without…
Your love is what
makes me a whole man…


I need to give back
what I’ve taken from you…

I need to hold you,
like you’ve held me…

Inside my love swells,
it needs to break out…
I need you to be there,
to need me…


God made me man…
You were born woman…

Devine plan,
or cosmic collision?

I really don’t care…
It really don’t matter…
All I know of this life,
is I need you…



~ live and let live ~
© Copyright 2001 Ray Conley - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 01-09-2001 11:06 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

This likes me...
bbent
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2 posted 01-10-2001 01:30 AM       View Profile for bbent   Email bbent   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit bbent's Home Page   View IP for bbent

Hi Sunshine,

           You Thank.

                      bbent


~ live and let live ~
Paula Finn
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3 posted 01-10-2001 01:38 AM       View Profile for Paula Finn   Email Paula Finn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paula Finn

Oh this is just wonderful...beautiful bbent

Life's a game...but who says you have to follow the rules?


Poeminister
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4 posted 01-10-2001 01:40 AM       View Profile for Poeminister   Email Poeminister   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Poeminister's Home Page   View IP for Poeminister

Wonderful write.  Enjoyed the read.

Poeminister
bbent
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5 posted 01-10-2001 03:57 AM       View Profile for bbent   Email bbent   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit bbent's Home Page   View IP for bbent

Hi Paula,
Hi Pominister,

  Thanks for reading my poem,
Thanks for your kind comments.

                             bbent
CocoBaci
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6 posted 01-10-2001 01:21 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

BB, this one sings a melody sweet to my ears...
Splendid write and I thank you for the enjoyable read...
coco


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Sunnyone
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7 posted 01-12-2001 02:29 AM       View Profile for Sunnyone   Email Sunnyone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunnyone's Home Page   View IP for Sunnyone

Oh, bbent......this is so very beautiful in it's thoughts of love. It shows the special needs that two people share in a love that is strong and forever......the kind of love that we all seek......
Great poem......


Write on!
-<--<--{(@

passing shadows
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8 posted 01-27-2003 11:59 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

Ray, this is beautiful!
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