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“Need” |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
I need you to touch me… Both inside and out… I need you… To lighten my burden… The shelter you give me, I can’t live without… Your love is what makes me a whole man… I need to give back what I’ve taken from you… I need to hold you, like you’ve held me… Inside my love swells, it needs to break out… I need you to be there, to need me… God made me man… You were born woman… Devine plan, or cosmic collision? I really don’t care… It really don’t matter… All I know of this life, is I need you… ~ live and let live ~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This likes me... |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
Hi Sunshine, You Thank. bbent ~ live and let live ~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh this is just wonderful...beautiful bbent Life's a game...but who says you have to follow the rules? |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Wonderful write. Enjoyed the read. Poeminister |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
Hi Paula, Hi Pominister, Thanks for reading my poem, Thanks for your kind comments. bbent |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
BB, this one sings a melody sweet to my ears... Splendid write and I thank you for the enjoyable read... coco [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 01-10-2001).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, bbent......this is so very beautiful in it's thoughts of love. It shows the special needs that two people share in a love that is strong and forever......the kind of love that we all seek...... Great poem......  Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Ray, this is beautiful! |
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